I'll review your channel!
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MiketheDbacker26
Let's Player
Could you check out my channel? I make photoshop tutorials and have just started after a few months since I was busy. It would be great to get some feedback!
I watched your 2 most recent ones, and both were really informative! I like how you go into detail, I think tutorials work best when you assume the viewer knows nothing about Photoshop. There really wasn't a whole lot of negative that I saw, there were a few times that I think you went into detail a little too much detail, but I wouldn't call this a major concern. And of course, consistently uploading would help, but you seem to know that
. Your channel was doing pretty well before you took your big leave, so if you stayed consistent I'm sure you shouldn't have any growth problems. Overall, I think you have a good channel going, and personally, as someone who could really use some training in how to use Photoshop, I'm sure I could use some of your videos to help me out haha 
. Hi I was wondering if you could give my channel a look over? For commentary, gameplay, audio and my outro. Thanks very much!
Commentary: Your commentary wasn't that bad, you talked for a good bit through the episode (I watched your most recent Infamous video). I think the one thing I would try to work on is cohesiveness, a lot of times (especially during fighting sequences) your commentary was mainly reacting to what happened onscreen, like "holy crap" and "oh my god" things like that. I can relate haha, it's hard to think of things to say when you're concentrating on the video, but I think it's important to try and keep a conversation flowing (as in don't commentate for like 10 seconds, take a 10 second pause, then commentate for 10 seconds in a cycle). But as a whole I found you fairly entertaining, and when you did speak for a good amount of time I thought it was great!
Gameplay: The gameplay was good! The quality of the footage was good, having 720p is always a must-have. My one recommendation would be to consider limiting the amount of series you work on at once. It won't really hurt your channel from an audience standpoint, but it could get hard for you if you have to balance 4 different series.
Audio: The audio was fine, both yours and the game! All that sounded fine to me.
Outro: I like your setup with the outro, having a link to the next video and a twitter handle. No complaints there!
Archaeo98
I've Got It
Thank you very much for the feedback! I will work on keeping my conversation flowing as much as I can. Yeah I have been thinking of taking a step back on the call of duty videos for a while and focusing more on my other series!
But again thank you very much for your feedback!
But again thank you very much for your feedback!
Kirbe Games
Liking YTtalk
Could you check out my channel I wanna see what I'm doing wrong.
Franklin
Yugituber
Thanks for the advice! I'll stop using the longer intros. 15 seconds sound good to me!
Cheers!
MiketheDbacker26
Let's Player
Your videos weren't terrible, but you don't have many up yet, so don't worry about "doing anything wrong". You're still new. My biggest problem was the outro. Instead of an arrow, I'd suggest putting a clip of the actual video you'd be linking to. It'll make it look nicer. And the annotations on the Twitter and Facebook links don't look all that great either, mainly because they're unclikable. I would suggest just typing out your Twitter handle on the actual outro.
Other than that, though, it's not too shabby of a start! Just work on consistent uploads and you should get the hang of things!
praisetyler
I've Got It
hey could you review my channel? how it looks and how my latest video is interesting or not? thanks in advance!
MiketheDbacker26
Let's Player
Could You check out my channel Please ? And Just give general Feedback ? I know im not amazing
But I would love some advice
Thanks Sooo Much ! !
Your content wasn't too bad, the sound quality wasn't top notch, but it was bearable. You have a good personality for these types of videos, in my opinion, but I'd try to be a tad more upbeat! In some videos you seemed kinda bored, or you didn't know what to say, things like that, so try to be more excited! In the videos you did seem upbeat in I thought you were great! Other than that, I think you're doing good, you have a good banner! Just stick to what you're doing and I think you'll find the right balance in time!
Blue snowball = perfect mic haha (same one I use, thing is amazing!), and I love your confidence and voice when you commentate! You sound like you've been at it for a while (I watched your most recent one), and since it's your 4th video, I'd say you're doing fine! The one issue I have though would be the banner. Your logo cuts off part of your name, and it's a little difficult to read at first glance. I'd recommend either making the words a more solid color, or make the background solid, and try to make your name smaller so the logo won't cut it off. But other than that, I think you're off to a great start!
BlazingMenace
Liking YTtalk
Won't go into details. Go ahead and watch the review on my front page, if you're still doing this.
MiketheDbacker26
Let's Player
Not too shabby! The video flowed nicely, and I like some of the editing work put in. The one flaw I noticed was audio transitions. A good review in my opinion should sound like it was done in one take (though nobody ACTUALLY/SHOULD do this). A lot of times it sounded like two audio files overlapped, or there were some weird pauses between audio segments that felt..unnatural in way. The quality was fine, though, and overall it wasn't bad, considering it was the first review on your channel.