The script of the video was pretty good haha, never seen a video quite like that before xD, but it was good, and the video editing that went into it (which is what I assume you mean by artwork) was well-done. I also love your Subscribe/Like/Comment outro, mixing it with the plot of your skit was a really good idea.
My one issue was the sound quality, and it may have just been because you were outside, but there were a few parts where it was actually kinda hard to hear what was being said, and the wind kinda jumbled the sound a bit. Unfortunately, as good as your video is, something like that might turn people away. Recording stuff outside is a lot harder because there's so much other noise and stuff going on, so I might try and get a better camera for outdoor stuff. But other than that quality issue (and it sounded much better when you were inside so I'm assuming it was just being outdoors that affected it), I thought it was a great skit!