Would love some channel feedback!

[six cylinder]

Okay SO a couple months ago I asked what I need to improve my channel. I've done some of these things. IM looking for some to review my channel to see if im going in the right direction

 

[Noot moosie]

From a first look I'd say you definitely need to up your mic quality. Sound quality will very quickly turn people away from your channel. (I watched your titanfall review video) I also noticed you didnt seem all that enthusiastic in your commentary, and even said your intro sucked or something like that at one point in the video which you should probably avoid. Also maybe do a little more preparation and have some sort of script before doing a review, at least some key points written out or something. Hope this helped!! I'm also starting out in youtube gaming and would love some feedback on my channel as well!

 

[six cylinder]

From a first look I'd say you definitely need to up your mic quality. Sound quality will very quickly turn people away from your channel. (I watched your titanfall review video) I also noticed you didnt seem all that enthusiastic in your commentary, and even said your intro sucked or something like that at one point in the video which you should probably avoid. Also maybe do a little more preparation and have some sort of script before doing a review, at least some key points written out or something. Hope this helped!! I'm also starting out in youtube gaming and would love some feedback on my channel as well!

okay that video I need to put more work in but I had limted time you think you can give feed back on another video?