Would like a review on my newest video [Gaming]

[Cameron484]

Hello fellow youtubers,

I would like some general feedback on my newest video. I did notice that I ate my words a few times, but in reality I can't judge it from the viewers perspective. Let me know what you think/what needs improvement.

 

[Ninja]

You did have a few flaws with your words, but other than that you were to the point and educated on the topic! Maybe try to put a small clip before the intro to reel viewers in (just a tip) Keep up the good work!