TOO MUCH OR TOO LITTLE??

Plembi

Plembi

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So, it wasn't too long that I posted this video on a game called Spiral knights. It's a cute little games so be sure to download it. Anyway, I believe my commentating is lacking something and I feel like my videos drag on for too long. So I'd like some advice from the viewers prospective. I want to know if my commentating is well done, if the video is too long to watch and if it gets boring. I'm opened for constructive criticism, so please let me know as I really wish to improve the quality of my videos. Thank you :)
 
The commentary is mostly good, however sometimes there's a little too much "um" or "yeah" otherwise great video man!
 
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