Thoughts on better "flow"

GrgakGames

Phoenix Games Enthusiast (Please end my life)
So I have been doing this for about a month and was curious on what you guys think.
From one of my first videos to the most recent have I improved?
Does it flow better?
Overall impressions on the videos?
I don't mind hearing "SO GOOD THANKS" but I would love some constructive criticism.

NEWEST VIDEO.




SECOND TO OLDEST VIDEO


I did not post my first one since that was a "draft" to figure out everything.
Tell me what you think and what I could improve on!
 
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