The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey Review

[Hypersonic55]

Hellow there people of YTtalk i was wondering if you could give me some feedback on my review of The Hobbit. It's spoiler-free and i would like some criticism and ways on which i can improve on it. I'm still trying to figure out a style for my reviews and i think i may have found my groove with my more recent reviews, but i need to know what the deal is from other people so help a guy out please.

 

[therealETHAN]

Camera and mic are alright, but maybe a better quality would be better.
Your reviews need to be recognisable, maybe some custom thumbnails, the intro is a very common one, and I don't like it, you could maybe make like a News/TV show style intro?
Maybe more images and video previews embedded in your video?

 

[Hypersonic55]

i'm still working on getting enough cash for a new camera. and when it come to custom thumbnails that's not an easy process for youtbers who aren't partners and the intro is new for me, never had one before but yeah it could be improved. thanks for the imput, its very much appreciated.