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LowJax

LowJax

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Hey guys, Many have given me great advice and tips as I continue to grow. I want to help as much as I can as well. I will be reviewing your channels and giving my advice and comments about it. For instance, what needs to be worked on and what is great! All I ask is if you could look at my channel as well, Let me know any kind of tips you have or any advice! Lets help each other grow even further!
 
Hey man thanks for doing this, means the world.

As far as your channel goes, the content is pretty solid although a bit inconsistent. It seems you have a lot of series going on and they are updated very infrequently. Also sometimes you have a web cam and other times you don't. I'm pretty sure its because the ones that don't are supposed to be the bread commentating but I'm not 100% sure as I thought the piece of bread was you logo/the character you played in your commentaries. I suggest sticking to just a few games and deciding if you want a webcam or not. Besides that the commentary along with the video/audio quality isn't bad.

I hope you like my channel!
 
LLproductions01 said:
Hey man thanks for doing this, means the world.

As far as your channel goes, the content is pretty solid although a bit inconsistent. It seems you have a lot of series going on and they are updated very infrequently. Also sometimes you have a web cam and other times you don't. I'm pretty sure its because the ones that don't are supposed to be the bread commentating but I'm not 100% sure as I thought the piece of bread was you logo/the character you played in your commentaries. I suggest sticking to just a few games and deciding if you want a webcam or not. Besides that the commentary along with the video/audio quality isn't bad.

I hope you like my channel!
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Yes, when I don't have a webcam I'm playing a character, as for your channel it looks good! I would say your logo and banner need a bit of work.. as much as I love Zelda It doesn't really express your channel as well, also the profile logo, I really have no Idea what it is. It looks funny but...I really don't know what your channel is about. Your content quality is great though! I believe you can do a lot if you find a niche to stick with! I hope this helps a bit![DOUBLEPOST=1456447268,1456447079][/DOUBLEPOST]
ehmaysi said:
Gonna take a look at your channel now, I'll update the post when I've finished. Appreciate the feedback.
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You have some fantastic editing skills my friend! Your channel looks amazing, very nice matching thumbnails, great artwork. Keep up with what you are doing, a lot of people like it. Just stick to what you feel like is best for you man!
 
I love your channel. The mexican bread videos are fantastic as I have a friend who is mexican and I get all the cusswords and yelling no mames guey. Love it. And I saw you playing wick and thought it was hilarious watching a white boy yelling "orelay guey!" I love your stuff man. Keep it up
 
javacentral said:
I love your channel. The mexican bread videos are fantastic as I have a friend who is mexican and I get all the cusswords and yelling no mames guey. Love it. And I saw you playing wick and thought it was hilarious watching a white boy yelling "orelay guey!" I love your stuff man. Keep it up
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LOL thanks man I greatly appreciate it! I have never seen a channel that reviews coffee...I tell you what, That's something that has never been done before I'm sure you'll get a lot of viewers if you keep up what you are doing. I might suggest tweaking your audio JUST a little bit or maybe getting some sound foam where your voice doesn't echo as much. Other than that, what you are doing is definitely unique![DOUBLEPOST=1456497010,1456496822][/DOUBLEPOST]
sodaholiczir said:
Hey I would love a review!
I'll take a look at your channel once I get home
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you have fantastic audio bud! I might change the banner and logo to something warm and inviting that catches peoples eye. Also make sure to put your uploads in your home tab! I almost thought you didn't have any content! Other than that I think you are on a great path!
 
Lol I like your channel a lot. The Jose the Bread videos are awesome, and sometimes your accent sounds a bit Indian. Keep it up, man. Be the greatest bread you can be, just like your momma said you would be!

My advice would be to have more playlists and have them available on the channel page, but as it's been pointed out it looks like you have a lot of series with just one or two videos. That's OK because you should only make the videos you're feeling at the time (makes for better, more entertaining content) but it also means that it's hard to really figure out what your channel's focus is besides general gaming.
 
Thanks for the review!
Your jose bread videos definitely stand out! although i do notice some inconsistencies like your undertale series which stopped halfway.
You can also work on your thumbnails, make them more attractive. Mic quality is pretty good too!
 
Before I looked at the rest of the videos on your channel, I was really confused by the Jose thing. I was like, is it real? It doesn't sound real, but at the same time it did...but it didn't. Then I realized it was just a character. I like it though. It's fun and different, and that makes you unique and enjoyable to watch. I also like that you do use a webcam, I know some gamers don't and can get away with it- but I feel like most should to make it more personal, and it's fun to see reactions! I know it's hard for gamers because there are SO MANY.

Your banner, to me at least, is a little disorienting. It's a tiny bit fuzzy and makes my eyes dizzy (if that makes sense). I like it, but at the same time I feel like your name should be clearer and stand out :\

Oh and your sound is good too!
 
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