Bennett's Playtime
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So, these are my thoughts as I'm watching:
1. You're gorgeous, and I love your accent!
2. From the title, and the pictures I thought you would be doing a bright pink lip. I would re-title this something like, How to wear a Pale Pink Lip. Or How to Wear a Rose Pink Lip. Something like that.
3. Shaky Cam? Maybe need a better tripod?
4. Maybe do 2x speed when you're actually applying makeup? I kept wanting to skip to the next step.
5. You kept looking at the mirror when you were talking, instead of the camera. I would say, try to just look at the mirror when you're applying makeup.
6. You don't mention it's a daytime look until the end. I would mention that towards the beginning.
7. More Pictures! Throw in a quick, short montage of the finished look, either at the beginning or end. Or both
8. For some reason, there's about 10 minutes of just black nothing tacked on the end of your video. Not sure why...?
I re-read everything, and it sounds like a lot of negative. But I think overall you did an excellent job applying makeup, and letting the viewer know what you were using, and how to use it. It's just a lot of little editing things that could really punch up your video to make it stand out.
Hope this helps you!
~Sherri
1. You're gorgeous, and I love your accent!
2. From the title, and the pictures I thought you would be doing a bright pink lip. I would re-title this something like, How to wear a Pale Pink Lip. Or How to Wear a Rose Pink Lip. Something like that.
3. Shaky Cam? Maybe need a better tripod?
4. Maybe do 2x speed when you're actually applying makeup? I kept wanting to skip to the next step.
5. You kept looking at the mirror when you were talking, instead of the camera. I would say, try to just look at the mirror when you're applying makeup.
6. You don't mention it's a daytime look until the end. I would mention that towards the beginning.
7. More Pictures! Throw in a quick, short montage of the finished look, either at the beginning or end. Or both
8. For some reason, there's about 10 minutes of just black nothing tacked on the end of your video. Not sure why...?
I re-read everything, and it sounds like a lot of negative. But I think overall you did an excellent job applying makeup, and letting the viewer know what you were using, and how to use it. It's just a lot of little editing things that could really punch up your video to make it stand out.
Hope this helps you!
~Sherri
Absywally
Member
Thankyou so much for your feedback! I really apprieciate it!!! Haha I do not know why there is just blackness at the end of the video, maybe something happens with the editing!! Thankyou so much againSo, these are my thoughts as I'm watching:
1. You're gorgeous, and I love your accent!
2. From the title, and the pictures I thought you would be doing a bright pink lip. I would re-title this something like, How to wear a Pale Pink Lip. Or How to Wear a Rose Pink Lip. Something like that.
3. Shaky Cam? Maybe need a better tripod?
4. Maybe do 2x speed when you're actually applying makeup? I kept wanting to skip to the next step.
5. You kept looking at the mirror when you were talking, instead of the camera. I would say, try to just look at the mirror when you're applying makeup.
6. You don't mention it's a daytime look until the end. I would mention that towards the beginning.
7. More Pictures! Throw in a quick, short montage of the finished look, either at the beginning or end. Or both
8. For some reason, there's about 10 minutes of just black nothing tacked on the end of your video. Not sure why...?
I re-read everything, and it sounds like a lot of negative. But I think overall you did an excellent job applying makeup, and letting the viewer know what you were using, and how to use it. It's just a lot of little editing things that could really punch up your video to make it stand out.
Hope this helps you!
~Sherri
