Review my newest sketch!

[Rezthekinez]

Hello lovely forum readers,
Just uploaded my newest sketch yesterday, and I'm hoping I could get some constructive criticism on it.

Also, I just got a shotgun mic and digital audio recorder. Since it it was my first time, some of the audio is very quiet. So I apologize for that. Definitely won't happen in the next video! Cheers guys!

 

[Hi_Im_Michael]

Hello lovely forum readers,
Just uploaded my newest sketch yesterday, and I'm hoping I could get some constructive criticism on it.

Also, I just got a shotgun mic and digital audio recorder. Since it it was my first time, some of the audio is very quiet. So I apologize for that. Definitely won't happen in the next video! Cheers guys!

The audio being on one side was the only thing I didnt like. I thought it was funny & great, nice angles and script I gave it a thumbs up

 

[Jawad Soomro]

hahaha your acting skills are really nice!
Your ideas are unique and funny
I think its cool

 

[Rezthekinez]

hahaha your acting skills are really nice!
Your ideas are unique and funny
I think its cool

Thanks a lot man! Appreciate it![DOUBLEPOST=1434063775,1434063505][/DOUBLEPOST]

The audio being on one side was the only thing I didnt like. I thought it was funny & great, nice angles and script I gave it a thumbs up

Yeah I figured out that I was recording in stereo mode only into the left channel. Need to either record in mono or use a XLR-Y cable. But thank you for your feedback.