Review My Lets Play Channel

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ItsBrendanFYI

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Hey I am a Lets Player who has been making videos for like a month or so. I am not getting really any view on most of my videos so I want to know what I been doing that is wrong or what I am not doing to get views. Yes I know I don't have a banner (that should change in the next month having a friend make me a really good one) and Subscriber Video (don't have enough content to make a good one in my opinion, if you think I do tell me), so that going against me. But I would like to know if there anything else I can do or stop doing to get more view or what not. Main video I want reviewed is this one
Thanks for the help.
 
Immediately I think the main thing you need to work on is your commentary and audio quality. I found it difficult to understand what you were saying and you mumbled too much. Try to speak clearly and with enthusiasm.
 
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