Requesting Video Review for my latest piece: "Compublanca"

[sparrowtm]

Hey folks, so I'm specialising in green screen skits about PC gaming. But I'm really not sure about the general quality of what I'm doing. My last request here was met with zero answers, so I'm trying it once more. What would interest me is what my deficiencies in editing are, if the topic, narration and scenes are actually funny or awkward, and of course any recommendations you might have.

Thanks a lot guys and gals!

 

[MiketheDbacker26]

I thought that the editing was good! Overall, I thought you did a good job with the editing, if I had to think of any criticism, I'd probably say that some of the pauses felt a little awkward. There would be narration, then a pause where there was no voice, just scene. I see what you were going for with that, and I'm not saying that including parts like that is bad, but a few of them felt a little awkward, like they may have dragged on for a couple seconds too long.

But the rest of it was well done, I thought the editing was really good, and the writing was nice!