Opinions on my outro

[TheManCave]

Hey everyone! Like the title says, I would like to know your opinion on my outro. It took quite a while to work on with photoshop. The empty box on top will be there as a clip of my previous video with an annotation link.

I was going for the "comic book" feel to match my custom thumbnails and intro.

and obviously the big "sample" text written across the image won't be there

 

[TheDoctor_13]

It's pretty good, though some of the graphics are 'smushed' which kinda makes it look un professional.

 

[LyfeWithDragons]

Hey everyone! Like the title says, I would like to know your opinion on my outro. It took quite a while to work on with photoshop. The empty box on top will be there as a clip of my previous video with an annotation link.

I was going for the "comic book" feel to match my custom thumbnails and intro.

and obviously the big "sample" text written across the image won't be there

Try moving the subscription button where the characters are, and just remove them entirely. It won't look as cluttered. See how that looks to you.

 

[TheManCave]

Try moving the subscription button where the characters are, and just remove them entirely. It won't look as cluttered. See how that looks to you.

Thanks for the advice! However, I think that'll be overkill, having a subscribe button so gigantic .[DOUBLEPOST=1395460013,1395459942][/DOUBLEPOST]

It's pretty good, though some of the graphics are 'smushed' which kinda makes it look un professional.

Which graphics are you referring to? smushed as in flat? Not sure I'm uderstanding. Either way, thank you for the advice/suggestion!

 

[TheDoctor_13]

If you sen me the psd file (you can do so through 'start a conversation' button when you click my name) so it remains private, and I'll see what I can do.

 

[LyfeWithDragons]

Thanks for the advice! However, I think that'll be overkill, having a subscribe button so gigantic .[DOUBLEPOST=1395460013,1395459942][/DOUBLEPOST]
Which graphics are you referring to? smushed as in flat? Not sure I'm uderstanding. Either way, thank you for the advice/suggestion!

To each their own. I wasn't saying it has to be that size, haha.

 

[JeriKane]

OMG Vivi!!!!!! *marks out*

Cloud. >_>

Overall it does look pretty awesome. The design and goal for it to look comic-ish is spot on. I agree that it looks smushed a bit, but that can be fixed.

 

[TheManCave]

If you sen me the psd file (you can do so through 'start a conversation' button when you click my name) so it remains private, and I'll see what I can do.

Wow Really? Ok I'll send it right away! Thank you so much

 

[TheDoctor_13]

@TheManCave ok so I did some edits, un 'smushed' to the best of my ability, and did some tweaking to the effects. Tell me what you think and I'll send a high quality png file and the psd file. Do you have some good music to go with it?

Also I do feel the video box is to big and a weird viewing ration, if you want to do any edits about that or any suggestions about that, is welcome.

 

[katysbeautychannel]

You really want "subscribe" to be the thing that stands out most....so a gigantic button might be a good thing.