New Video (Feedback Please)

MattZ

MattZ

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Hi guys, so here's my new vid, if you don't know me already, I make videos on the latest events in the world of WWE.

Even if you don't like the topic I am talking about, I'd appreciate feedback on whether you think I did enough to keep the audience interested, and whether I spoke in a proper fluent way that may draw someone back for more vids.

Thanks in advance.
 
I'm not a wrestling fan, so this 'review' is just going on quality and first impressions:

- You speak clearly and not too fast or slow. You seem to know what you're talking about and don't mumble, this is good!

- Those black bars gotta goooo ;) not sure what computer you're recording on, but most editing software should have a crop function to allow you to make it 16:9 (easily done, just sit a bit further from the camera, and you won't chop your own head off). Or if you can, use a mobile phone or actual camera that records in wide.

- Good job reminding folks to sub/etc but I would put this at the end of the video (that way, you're saying 'well here is my video I hope you like it, if you did subscribe/like/etc' rather than requesting it before you've done anything.

Hope that helps?
 
Frankie Turner said:
I'm not a wrestling fan, so this 'review' is just going on quality and first impressions:

- You speak clearly and not too fast or slow. You seem to know what you're talking about and don't mumble, this is good!

- Those black bars gotta goooo ;) not sure what computer you're recording on, but most editing software should have a crop function to allow you to make it 16:9 (easily done, just sit a bit further from the camera, and you won't chop your own head off). Or if you can, use a mobile phone or actual camera that records in wide.

- Good job reminding folks to sub/etc but I would put this at the end of the video (that way, you're saying 'well here is my video I hope you like it, if you did subscribe/like/etc' rather than requesting it before you've done anything.

Hope that helps?
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Thanks I appreciate the reply!

the only thing I have to record on is an Ipad so i dunno how to get rid of them :/ do you?

I used to put the "please sub" thing at the end but I changed to the start because based on my audience retention the end of my video is much lower viewed than the start.

Thanks for the feedback, hope u reply to this about the ipad ;)
 
MattZ said:
Thanks I appreciate the reply!

the only thing I have to record on is an Ipad so i dunno how to get rid of them :/ do you?

I used to put the "please sub" thing at the end but I changed to the start because based on my audience retention the end of my video is much lower viewed than the start.

Thanks for the feedback, hope u reply to this about the ipad ;)
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There is probably an app you can get for that. I do admit, it's annoying that it's only 'full screen' when viewed on the ipad :(
 
Frankie Turner said:
There is probably an app you can get for that. I do admit, it's annoying that it's only 'full screen' when viewed on the ipad :(
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Is there an app? yeah Not sure what to do really I can't really buy a camera atm but I will look to in the future, for the moment not sure how I can improve the quality on my Ipad
 
Frankie Turner said:
Well that was a guess :giggle: browse the app store see what they got!
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I don't really know what i'm looking for though haha! I guess i could somehow try transfer them to my comp then edit them on there , i don't got any editing software though and normally when i try send them to the comp via email it says files too big!
 
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