New To Youtube, feedback helpful!!

[Lee Watson]

So i've recently started to make videos and have been enjoying it a whole lot, but obviously being new the views are a slow paced process which means not much criticism from audiences other then friends/family. So hoping this will help with that.
If you could check out my videos and give me feedback would be muchly appreciated. Cheers.

 

[Epic12]

Sorry but your channel link is broken, do you know why?

 

[RedFox]

This should be in the Reviews & Channel Feedback section of the forums, as this is an Introduction forum for users to Introduce themselves, I'll give you feedback once I've given your channel a little look.

EDIT: Yeah, like @TheEpicmanLives12 said your channel link is broken, use this to fix it: