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eggland

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I am trying out this new style of video (i.e different from my last channel) and i was just wondering what you thought of it? ( not sure if this is in the right forum or not so apology's in advance). (i cant put on the url but it is the only one on my channel)
 
Hey! A fellow Egg name haha.

First of all, you're channel URL isn't working, but I was able to find you through the search on YouTube. You should probably get a YouTube URL so the channel URL works. Go to your YouTube Settings to set it. Your YouTube icon looks a bit cluttered, and since most of the time your icon is going to be small, you should probably get rid of the small images and either enlarge the text or use only one image. You banner also cuts off at the top, and the text can't fully be seen. You can search online for a banner template so you're sure the text doesn't cut off. Also, make sure your video titles are clean and nice looking as possible. Capitalize the right words. In addition, if possible, try to make your videos widescreen. As for your commentary, most of it was good, but sometimes there were prolonged areas of silence and sometimes I couldn't understand you. But keep trying! The best advice for commentary is practice and show emotion! Good luck!
 
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