Let me know what you think :)

Toastedjaffas

Toastedjaffas

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Hey there I uploaded a video of me and my friend playing squad. I spent a very long time editing it yet it's only gotten 5 views. I was wondering if I was doing anything wrong or if anyone could let me know how I could improve it? Many thanks :D

 
Alright @Toastedjaffas I'm gonna lay it on you here because I feel like maybe you need to hear it.

I feel like both of you are very monotone in the video apart from a few close call moments where you get a bit excited. For the majority of the video I didn't really feel a connection with you or your friend because I don't know I didn't feel like I was a part of it I sort of felt like I was listening to two lads on Teamspeak :P

Now this isn't to discourage or take away from anything. I feel like you put a good amount of effort into the editing side of things which I appreciate and I love the addition of the subtitles because there are times where I feel some people may struggle to understand what some of you are saying.

So all in all good video and good editing but the only thing lacking is character. Commentating takes time to develop and grow and eventually both of you will get more confident and create a chemistry with not only yourselfs but with your viewers.

What makes Lewis, Lewis and what makes Scott, Scott?

At the moment I cant tell who is who :P

Good luck in the future guys and I know the awesome people here on YTTalk will be the ones to help you succeed :)
 
ChargunHD said:
Alright @Toastedjaffas I'm gonna lay it on you here because I feel like maybe you need to hear it.

I feel like both of you are very monotone in the video apart from a few close call moments where you get a bit excited. For the majority of the video I didn't really feel a connection with you or your friend because I don't know I didn't feel like I was a part of it I sort of felt like I was listening to two lads on Teamspeak :p

Now this isn't to discourage or take away from anything. I feel like you put a good amount of effort into the editing side of things which I appreciate and I love the addition of the subtitles because there are times where I feel some people may struggle to understand what some of you are saying.

So all in all good video and good editing but the only thing lacking is character. Commentating takes time to develop and grow and eventually both of you will get more confident and create a chemistry with not only yourselfs but with your viewers.

What makes Lewis, Lewis and what makes Scott, Scott?

At the moment I cant tell who is who :p

Good luck in the future guys and I know the awesome people here on YTTalk will be the ones to help you succeed :)
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Thanks a lot for your comment dude, I don't mind if you tell me how it is that's why I put it up here so I can be told :P I will really work on the atmosphere of the conversations and try to keep it less monotone. Again thanks for giving me a full and honest review :)
 
Toastedjaffas said:
Thanks a lot for your comment dude, I don't mind if you tell me how it is that's why I put it up here so I can be told :p I will really work on the atmosphere of the conversations and try to keep it less monotone. Again thanks for giving me a full and honest review :)
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All good bro, like I said it takes time to work on these things and eventually you will get the hang of it, we all will :)
 
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