Is my channel going the right direction?

[KishKosh]

Hey everyone, I wanted to request for a review, Me and my closest friend have been making videos for some time (about 5 weeks) I think but the channel was made last year just about, We are a comedy based channel with the side of gaming. But I just wanted a review on is it the right direction our channel is going, (example not to many different type of things going on in one video) and how the editting is. I think the far most video I'd like reviewed is our Guru josh project infinity - music video parody

Reviewed.
but the channel in general just knowing our editing, acting and so and so is going a good way would be great feedback or having help showing us what we should do more on. This is kish kosh thankyou for your time!

I'd love to hear all reviews (our channel is based on real life comedy with side of gaming just for those who are not sure)

 

[Epic12]

I'd say to improve grammar in some of your titles and perhaps make thumbnails for some of your videos. I will give you more feedback if you like!

 

[twigboy16]

Hey guess so i wanted to say good job on your music video, those are really hard things to make and i think you guess did a good job making it. Must of took alot of time to film, plan and edit. I watched one of your scary game vids and you (vlogish) video in your room (i think) and my input as far as editing goes, i think your gamer videos are really good, but if you can you should try and add those little screens that are at the top right corner to see your guesses faces and reactions when something scary pops out. Also to take in consideration if there is too much just walking around and if there isnt any real progression in the game you can just cut those out and make your video shorter and more entertaining to watch. Now I don't know if you guess are planning on vlogging or anything like that, but i am a vlogger myself and so i can help you and can relate more with those kinda of videos. So if you are going to post vlogging types of videos with your gaming videos i would suggest to make sure the location of the video is in a interesting place, with a cool background that your audience can look at. Make sure there is good lighting in the shot so your viewers can see you face more clearly and if there are any side conversations or mispronunciation with any words make sure you cut all that out so it doesnt seem that you did those on purpose. I think you guess have great ideas, for good content thats just my helpful criticism I hope and keep doing what you guys do

 

[KishKosh]

Hey guess so i wanted to say good job on your music video, those are really hard things to make and i think you guess did a good job making it. Must of took alot of time to film, plan and edit. I watched one of your scary game vids and you (vlogish) video in your room (i think) and my input as far as editing goes, i think your gamer videos are really good, but if you can you should try and add those little screens that are at the top right corner to see your guesses faces and reactions when something scary pops out. Also to take in consideration if there is too much just walking around and if there isnt any real progression in the game you can just cut those out and make your video shorter and more entertaining to watch. Now I don't know if you guess are planning on vlogging or anything like that, but i am a vlogger myself and so i can help you and can relate more with those kinda of videos. So if you are going to post vlogging types of videos with your gaming videos i would suggest to make sure the location of the video is in a interesting place, with a cool background that your audience can look at. Make sure there is good lighting in the shot so your viewers can see you face more clearly and if there are any side conversations or mispronunciation with any words make sure you cut all that out so it doesnt seem that you did those on purpose. I think you guess have great ideas, for good content thats just my helpful criticism I hope and keep doing what you guys do

Thanks so much for the feedback! meant a lot and oh heck the music video did take a lot of effort to do, took us half our day just walking to places. But thanks a lot im just hoping for other possible feedback from others, and hoping my chanel is going the right way![DOUBLEPOST=1393019345,1393019281][/DOUBLEPOST]

I'd say to improve grammar in some of your titles and perhaps make thumbnails for some of your videos. I will give you more feedback if you like!

Thanks a lot! , we have so far made half of them thumbnails, but its having the time to make the others with making videos I guess. and I shall have a look over my Videos to see for any mistakes