I'm Reviewing Videos :)

HTSimpleStuff said:
If you could review my video that would be great :) I think my commentary is kind of bad i Just need to get used to the whole commentary thing so i think it will get better over time. I used to be like a very shy person so talking out loud to myself feels weird for now. But i am already noticing it becomes easier the more you do it:)
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Cool thank you....I will get back to you on this as, my kids are really loud at the moment :D[DOUBLEPOST=1406726794,1406720343][/DOUBLEPOST]
HTSimpleStuff said:
If you could review my video that would be great :) I think my commentary is kind of bad i Just need to get used to the whole commentary thing so i think it will get better over time. I used to be like a very shy person so talking out loud to myself feels weird for now. But i am already noticing it becomes easier the more you do it:)
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Heya.......well.......I would have never said you were a shy person. It sounds like you have confidence :) I liked the way you did the video, and the way it was edited. At first I wasn't sure if you were joking or serious lol I'm thinking it might have been just a touch funnier if you started it off with more of you making it look like you're thinking this in your head -- rather than speaking to the audience. Almost as if this is something you've always wanted to try and couldn't take it anymore and just had to look it up. You did manage to capture that feeling as the video went on. But I'm not sure it hit right away. I really liked the echo part lol...that was funny. I would have liked the video to be just a little bit longer. Perhaps do the move one more time at the end, just because it is built up, but cuts off rather quickly at the end there.
Those are just my opinions, I still think it's a really good video and you did a good job :)
 
Katherinejane001 said:
Cool thank you....I will get back to you on this as, my kids are really loud at the moment :D[DOUBLEPOST=1406726794,1406720343][/DOUBLEPOST]
Heya.......well.......I would have never said you were a shy person. It sounds like you have confidence :) I liked the way you did the video, and the way it was edited. At first I wasn't sure if you were joking or serious lol I'm thinking it might have been just a touch funnier if you started it off with more of you making it look like you're thinking this in your head -- rather than speaking to the audience. Almost as if this is something you've always wanted to try and couldn't take it anymore and just had to look it up. You did manage to capture that feeling as the video went on. But I'm not sure it hit right away. I really liked the echo part lol...that was funny. I would have liked the video to be just a little bit longer. Perhaps do the move one more time at the end, just because it is built up, but cuts off rather quickly at the end there.
Those are just my opinions, I still think it's a really good video and you did a good job :)
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Thanks for the tips, appreciate it! :)
 
Katherinejane001 said:
Wow....it looks like you are really good at that game lol. You were killing zombies left, right and center. Some of the captions you had were good lol "Gasoline?" "Nah, chainsaw". I must say the graphics in the game (those chairs) is pretty amazing.
Is there any reason why you did titles instead of commentary using audio? I liked the part where the guy is getting dragged and it's like "nooooo" lol...that's funny. I'm not sure if it would have been funnier with your actual voice....but I did get a laugh out of it nonetheless :)
You did a good job with editing it...as it ran smoothly from shot to shot.
It looks like you know what you're doing in the game, and having fun with it.
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Thanks! lol i did sub title because i wasnt used to commentating and i didnt want to mess up the video. also thats actually 10+ videos edited into one so im not such how excited i would sound after 5 or so game overs.
 
the intergalactrix said:
btw, katherine, i could see you doing trip hop ala portishead. :)
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I have no idea what this sentence means lol.....what is trip hop ala portishead? :p[DOUBLEPOST=1406772158,1406771754][/DOUBLEPOST]
Peanutbutterwithfries said:
I made this about 5 months ago. I'm rebooting my channel soon. :D
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There are a few parts where you are silent there........it makes it seem like you're not quite sure what to say. Maybe try a script sometime..or write down a few things you would like to talk about, just so you're not caught in silence :) You did a good job in showing how to make a bomb though! I didn't know if it was going to work either...but all of a sudden it did hehe. I had no idea you could make bombs in Minecraft -- at the end there, you might have wanted to explain exactly what you can do with the bomb...does it even have a purpose? If it doesn't..then you can say it doesn't have a purpose lol..things like that. Those are just my thoughts :) Thanks for sharing.
 
Katherinejane001 said:
I have no idea what this sentence means lol.....what is trip hop ala portishead? :p[DOUBLEPOST=1406772158,1406771754][/DOUBLEPOST]
There are a few parts where you are silent there........it makes it seem like you're not quite sure what to say. Maybe try a script sometime..or write down a few things you would like to talk about, just so you're not caught in silence :) You did a good job in showing how to make a bomb though! I didn't know if it was going to work either...but all of a sudden it did hehe. I had no idea you could make bombs in Minecraft -- at the end there, you might have wanted to explain exactly what you can do with the bomb...does it even have a purpose? If it doesn't..then you can say it doesn't have a purpose lol..things like that. Those are just my thoughts :) Thanks for sharing.
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I made this a while ago and thank you for reviewing it. I found some flaws in the video myself but I needed someone else to help me find some others. Also my microphone was pretty bad thankfully my new computers microphone is way better. Thanks for the help and expect me to ask you to review new videos soon. ;)
 
Mines only short but your help would be greatly appreciated.

Could you please tell me which segment of the video has the best audio! Thanks!


Don't worry about how you tell me like said in the video, whatever is easier for you will be fine! :)
 
JackFredericks said:
Mines only short but your help would be greatly appreciated.

Could you please tell me which segment of the video has the best audio! Thanks!


Don't worry about how you tell me like said in the video, whatever is easier for you will be fine! :)
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Hmmmmmmmmm..........I think segment 1 was the best because it was easier for me to hear. Even though segment 1 did have a bit of static in the background. With segment 2 and 3, I found them muffled, and it was hard to hear. I'm not sure what you're using...but maybe you can try turning the volumes up -- or standing closer to the mic.
I don't know if others will like the static sound from segment 1....but to me, it made your voice clearer :)
 
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