I like your banner, it looks really professional and sure to catch interest. You have an intro before your videos which is catchy and not too long which might otherwise turn away future subscribers so that's good. And then you also have well designed thumbnails which really go together well with the vibe of your channel which is also a plus. One thing I would advise is looking into a better quality mic in the future. And also, even though your branding is very appealing to the eye, your content has to match that. When I was watching your let's plays you didn't add much excitement to what you were playing. I could get the same experience from playing the game myself. You need to add interesting commentary to your gaming videos that a potential subscriber can only get from your channel to set yourself apart from the rest of the gaming community.[DOUBLEPOST=1416546236,1416545088][/DOUBLEPOST]
The first impression of your channel is great off the back. Your channel trailer is short and to the point which is good because a lot of new viewers that come will see the trailer first. Also, I love your banner, it looks amazing. If I were to just stumble across your channel one day and saw your banner I would be instantly intrigued and wanting to see your content. When I go to the videos section and see the banners, eh, they're alright. Something I suggest you not do which a lot of gamers do is use the same thumbnail with different text over it for games of the same series. It looks basic and all amateur youtube gamers do it. And when I look at your video section the repeated thumbnails looks very unappealing to my eyes which you don't want. When I actually click on your videos and begin to watch that's when I'm completely thrown off. The sound editing embedded into the gameplay just sounds painful. And then not on all, but some of your videos, the echo of your microphone makes it almost impossible to hear what you're saying. Beyond that, your commentary isn't the best out there. Besides quality, commentary is what actually pulls in the viewers and there isn't much to your commentary which makes me think you're "different" and should go viral. Look to the most popular gamer on youtube, Pewdiepie. yes, he's annoying and childish. But at the same time he adds outrageous, I guess somewhat funny commentary which makes thousands of people subscribe a day. If you want to be successful, entertain others. If not, just continue with what you're doing.[DOUBLEPOST=1416547253][/DOUBLEPOST]
I'm up for it. I'm sure my channel needs some work.
As soon as I go to your channel your banner just POPS out at me. Which is a good thing. I wasn't really sure how to feel about the bright colors of your thumbnails until I started watching your videos and realized they actually go quite well with the content you make. You make light, happy, fun videos suited for any viewer. And you also have that personality and energy made to be behind a camera. You remind me of those guys from the videos made in the 90's I always had to watch in school even though they're way outdated. (Not a bad thing, just saying). And then you're a really good editor. Not bad for only being on youtube for 3 months. No way you're a beginner. The editing that you add in your videos is cute and goes well with the overall theme of your channel. The one thing I must say is against your thumbnails. The way that you use the same floating head with the same expression in every thumbnail. Try to be a little more diverse with your thumbnails. Besides that, nice channel.
