Tranxify
Loving YTtalk
Hello there Al BRUH!
I am mainly a CSGO player, for now, so I watched your two CSGO videos and your goals for 2016. After reviewing your channel, I found myself noticing the following:
Your banner and logo to not match your intro, different colours and styles.
Everything on the channel does not match the outro either. As we mentioned the outro, you really need a new outro. This one lacks a lot of stuff, including:
Does not allow you to drive traffic to more of your videos or to your social media.
The words roll in twice, which is boring and repetitive.
It is dull and not interactive.
An outro is what you use to calmly let your viewers leave your video or be so eager to continue watching another one of your videos. Preferably, your intro should be similar to your outro in the background for example.
I loved your audio, crystal clear and I guess you edit it well.
On your "s**t CSGO players say..." video, you put a lot of editing that made the whole video so... saturated. You started putting subtitles at the start, but then I think you got tired of it and saw it was time-consuming, so you stopped. I know, it takes a lot of time. As I said before, the amount of troll faces you put and just varied pictures are good, but it was way too much. Try to put less or at least reduce their size or don't put like 3 of them in one clip all of a sudden.
You do not need to use the "!!!" in your titles, one is enough. Remember, that's your title. It has to be professional, but in the same time catchy and funny if your video is funny. To the very beginning of the title mention your keywords, as it is important.
11 minutes for an "intro" video to your channel is too much. It is also too much for your goals for a year. I suggest making a separate introductory video to your channel. I know that I don't have one already because I need some more footage
On the same video, you showed that "Leave a like" thingy to the right of the bottom of the screen. It was too big and rather ugly. I do not think people want to get distracted from the footage just to see a huge like button taking a quarter of the bottom of the screen.
Still, your content was good. You can improve of course, but you are on the right way.
That was my opinion, it could be right and it could be wrong at some parts. I am not a professional Youtuber to tell you what to do, but I try my best to leave good feedback
I would love it if you review my channel, as it really helps out. I liked your CSGO content after all, I know this is not the place to ask for this, but if you want to collab, you can send me a private message on Youtube or reply to this with your interest.
I am mainly a CSGO player, for now, so I watched your two CSGO videos and your goals for 2016. After reviewing your channel, I found myself noticing the following:
Your banner and logo to not match your intro, different colours and styles.
Everything on the channel does not match the outro either. As we mentioned the outro, you really need a new outro. This one lacks a lot of stuff, including:
Does not allow you to drive traffic to more of your videos or to your social media.
The words roll in twice, which is boring and repetitive.
It is dull and not interactive.
An outro is what you use to calmly let your viewers leave your video or be so eager to continue watching another one of your videos. Preferably, your intro should be similar to your outro in the background for example.
I loved your audio, crystal clear and I guess you edit it well.
On your "s**t CSGO players say..." video, you put a lot of editing that made the whole video so... saturated. You started putting subtitles at the start, but then I think you got tired of it and saw it was time-consuming, so you stopped. I know, it takes a lot of time. As I said before, the amount of troll faces you put and just varied pictures are good, but it was way too much. Try to put less or at least reduce their size or don't put like 3 of them in one clip all of a sudden.
You do not need to use the "!!!" in your titles, one is enough. Remember, that's your title. It has to be professional, but in the same time catchy and funny if your video is funny. To the very beginning of the title mention your keywords, as it is important.
11 minutes for an "intro" video to your channel is too much. It is also too much for your goals for a year. I suggest making a separate introductory video to your channel. I know that I don't have one already because I need some more footage
On the same video, you showed that "Leave a like" thingy to the right of the bottom of the screen. It was too big and rather ugly. I do not think people want to get distracted from the footage just to see a huge like button taking a quarter of the bottom of the screen.
Still, your content was good. You can improve of course, but you are on the right way.
That was my opinion, it could be right and it could be wrong at some parts. I am not a professional Youtuber to tell you what to do, but I try my best to leave good feedback
I would love it if you review my channel, as it really helps out. I liked your CSGO content after all, I know this is not the place to ask for this, but if you want to collab, you can send me a private message on Youtube or reply to this with your interest.
LostTrigger
YTtalk Mad
I'd love a review, will post later today
AJ Bruh
Liking YTtalk
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Try and make sure you upload with more consistency mate. A couple times a week is a good mark to aim for. Your audio and video is pretty awesome, but needs a little more connection to the viewer with your voice. Try maybe boosting treble and bass a tiny bit in audacity! Your branding all seems to be in tip top shape, so more consistency and you're ready to roll!
AJ Bruh
Liking YTtalk
I may have gotten them mixed up haha
I gave his above. For you, I think you just need to make sure you fill up the tag bar with good tags. Try TubeBuddy or another YouTube app that recommends tags and what not in order to get the best and most consistent traffic on your videos. Your intro, in all honesty, is a little bit too much like the others, but if you feel it suits your channel then it can work. Your new audio sounds great and video quality is great. Your confidence is great too, and once you get more and more comfortable, you will see more growth and positive responses. Maybe try and get a pop filter for when you pronounce "p"s and "h"s so that the audio is smooth and has no heavy breaths. GOOD LUCK MATE
I gave his above. For you, I think you just need to make sure you fill up the tag bar with good tags. Try TubeBuddy or another YouTube app that recommends tags and what not in order to get the best and most consistent traffic on your videos. Your intro, in all honesty, is a little bit too much like the others, but if you feel it suits your channel then it can work. Your new audio sounds great and video quality is great. Your confidence is great too, and once you get more and more comfortable, you will see more growth and positive responses. Maybe try and get a pop filter for when you pronounce "p"s and "h"s so that the audio is smooth and has no heavy breaths. GOOD LUCK MATE
TwoTakes
YTtalk Mad
This is a really great channel review man- nice to see someone putting in so much effort =][DOUBLEPOST=1455214580,1455214189][/DOUBLEPOST]Hello there Al BRUH!
I am mainly a CSGO player, for now, so I watched your two CSGO videos and your goals for 2016. After reviewing your channel, I found myself noticing the following:
Your banner and logo to not match your intro, different colours and styles.
Everything on the channel does not match the outro either. As we mentioned the outro, you really need a new outro. This one lacks a lot of stuff, including:
Does not allow you to drive traffic to more of your videos or to your social media.
The words roll in twice, which is boring and repetitive.
It is dull and not interactive.
An outro is what you use to calmly let your viewers leave your video or be so eager to continue watching another one of your videos. Preferably, your intro should be similar to your outro in the background for example.
I loved your audio, crystal clear and I guess you edit it well.
On your "s**t CSGO players say..." video, you put a lot of editing that made the whole video so... saturated. You started putting subtitles at the start, but then I think you got tired of it and saw it was time-consuming, so you stopped. I know, it takes a lot of time. As I said before, the amount of troll faces you put and just varied pictures are good, but it was way too much. Try to put less or at least reduce their size or don't put like 3 of them in one clip all of a sudden.
You do not need to use the "!!!" in your titles, one is enough. Remember, that's your title. It has to be professional, but in the same time catchy and funny if your video is funny. To the very beginning of the title mention your keywords, as it is important.
11 minutes for an "intro" video to your channel is too much. It is also too much for your goals for a year. I suggest making a separate introductory video to your channel. I know that I don't have one already because I need some more footage
On the same video, you showed that "Leave a like" thingy to the right of the bottom of the screen. It was too big and rather ugly. I do not think people want to get distracted from the footage just to see a huge like button taking a quarter of the bottom of the screen.
Still, your content was good. You can improve of course, but you are on the right way.
That was my opinion, it could be right and it could be wrong at some parts. I am not a professional Youtuber to tell you what to do, but I try my best to leave good feedback
I would love it if you review my channel, as it really helps out. I liked your CSGO content after all, I know this is not the place to ask for this, but if you want to collab, you can send me a private message on Youtube or reply to this with your interest.
Like Tranxify said, your mic quality is really good, it is something you definitely notice straightaway.
Your channel art is pretty cool but maybe a little generic, its hard with so many game channels to stand out- maybe you could find a way to give it a bit more of a unique identity?
I watched your OBS tutorial which was pretty good, I would have used it if I had just come across it, although you could have maybe made it a bit snappier- I think when given the option, most will pick the shortest video tutorial they can find.
Other than that, I think Tranxify said it already- maybe link your intro sequence up with your channel art to make it part of your channel's unique brand identity.
MOO
Liking YTtalk
Here's my review of your channel:
First off, the logo and banner are nice. It is good that they are simple. They help establish branding.
Your "About" section seems to be more of what games you play and less about you. It is OK that you include that, but I do not think that is the primary purpose of the "About" section. I think first it should be about who you are and then what you do on the channel.
I think your intro should match the branding on your channel with the same style.
Your montages are good; I find them satisfying to watch for some reason.
Your thumbnails are eye catching, though some feel a bit overdone. To establish your brand you might want to have relatively similar thumbnails per series or game you play, and make sure you do not add too much to them. (You might scare potential viewers away)
I recommend changing your end card to maybe having some overlays of your previous videos (or other relevant videos) and annotations to them. If you do not want to do that, that is fine. But, if you can find a way to put annotations into your end card, that would be great
Anyways, that is what I think of your channel. Overall, I think it is great! We're all striving to improve. Aren't we? xD
If you have the time, I would love a channel review from you.
First off, the logo and banner are nice. It is good that they are simple. They help establish branding.
Your "About" section seems to be more of what games you play and less about you. It is OK that you include that, but I do not think that is the primary purpose of the "About" section. I think first it should be about who you are and then what you do on the channel.
I think your intro should match the branding on your channel with the same style.
Your montages are good; I find them satisfying to watch for some reason.
Your thumbnails are eye catching, though some feel a bit overdone. To establish your brand you might want to have relatively similar thumbnails per series or game you play, and make sure you do not add too much to them. (You might scare potential viewers away)
I recommend changing your end card to maybe having some overlays of your previous videos (or other relevant videos) and annotations to them. If you do not want to do that, that is fine. But, if you can find a way to put annotations into your end card, that would be great
Anyways, that is what I think of your channel. Overall, I think it is great! We're all striving to improve. Aren't we? xD
If you have the time, I would love a channel review from you.
LLproductions01
Member
Hey,
First off thanks for doing this, means a lot. As far as your channel goes I really like the branding. From your logo, to channel art all the way to your border on the videos, you've got it down. You have a solid commentating voice as well although in some of the videos you're a bit monotone. Video quality is great but maybe lower the game volume just a bit. Sometimes the gunfire mutes your voice out. Overall nice channel! Call of Duty videos are over-saturated so its hard to get noticed but if you keep up with the great content, you'll get noticed!
First off thanks for doing this, means a lot. As far as your channel goes I really like the branding. From your logo, to channel art all the way to your border on the videos, you've got it down. You have a solid commentating voice as well although in some of the videos you're a bit monotone. Video quality is great but maybe lower the game volume just a bit. Sometimes the gunfire mutes your voice out. Overall nice channel! Call of Duty videos are over-saturated so its hard to get noticed but if you keep up with the great content, you'll get noticed!
AJ Bruh
Liking YTtalk
Alright mate thanks for that! I've already fixed most of what you've said so I got that done and I hope you like my fixes that will be seen in the next few days.Here's my review of your channel:
First off, the logo and banner are nice. It is good that they are simple. They help establish branding.
Your "About" section seems to be more of what games you play and less about you. It is OK that you include that, but I do not think that is the primary purpose of the "About" section. I think first it should be about who you are and then what you do on the channel.
I think your intro should match the branding on your channel with the same style.
Your montages are good; I find them satisfying to watch for some reason.
Your thumbnails are eye catching, though some feel a bit overdone. To establish your brand you might want to have relatively similar thumbnails per series or game you play, and make sure you do not add too much to them. (You might scare potential viewers away)
I recommend changing your end card to maybe having some overlays of your previous videos (or other relevant videos) and annotations to them. If you do not want to do that, that is fine. But, if you can find a way to put annotations into your end card, that would be great
Anyways, that is what I think of your channel. Overall, I think it is great! We're all striving to improve. Aren't we? xD
If you have the time, I would love a channel review from you.
As for you, your videos are funny, creative, and somewhat innovative.
Your logo is a BIT too hard to see and recognize easily, but is fine.
Video and audio quality are good.
I love your intro and your outro.
The only gripe I have is that the acting is a little overdone. That distracts from the topic, but adds to the comedy. Whatever suits you!
Make sure to use good tags and to always fill out the tag bar!!!!!!![DOUBLEPOST=1455248495,1455248322][/DOUBLEPOST]
First notes:
Good audio quality.
Good video quality.
Cool topics and creative ideas.
Further notes:
Your thumbnails need work. Try adding complementary colors and some brighter tones to the thumbnails to make them stick out.
Try, if you can, to upload more consistently. You have lots of subs, just need to keep them happy with consistent uploads.
Lastly, your branding is a bit off and could use some changes, i.e. the logo and banner.
Thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it! GOOD LUCK MATE