i really wanna know your thoughts!

DJHellray

DJHellray

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so ive been making lots of video since a while and i wanna know if they are good enough, if im missing anything and all! so yeah this is my latest video pelase tell me what u think! i want them feedbacks!

 
Well I certainly see some good things. You have a nice presence on camera and a good speaking voice. I think you should put some more thought into what you say though. Personally I am not a fan of stretches where nothing is said or just random short interaction with the game. Of course a couple of those are fine but what I am looking for in a good commentary are some analytical skills. Some insights in what is going on on a deeper level, that may be story-wise or game mechanics, game progression, personal observations, etc. I saw too few of those in the two videos I watched to make the commentary stand out. And Let's Plays are all about the quality of the commentary.
 
Kelkschiz said:
Well I certainly see some good things. You have a nice presence on camera and a good speaking voice. I think you should put some more thought into what you say though. Personally I am not a fan of stretches where nothing is said or just random short interaction with the game. Of course a couple of those are fine but what I am looking for in a good commentary are some analytical skills. Some insights in what is going on on a deeper level, that may be story-wise or game mechanics, game progression, personal observations, etc. I saw too few of those in the two videos I watched to make the commentary stand out. And Let's Plays are all about the quality of the commentary.
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yeah i know what you mean in my bioshock infinite gameplay im kinda silent for some reason xD is u go look at my new soma video ull see im more talkative!

 
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