I need some tips ;)

DestroyerNecro

DestroyerNecro

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Hello
Firstly I want to say that i'm sorry if I don't have a right to post here or
If this is a wrong section(mods feel free to tell me).
So back to the topic. I am a Let's player ( I prefer horror genre ) and
I'm making videos since some time. I know I must have patience but I would
love if you can give me some tips on how to improve myself. You can watch
my latest video for example and tell me if I should do something to improve
myself. I accept any feedback ( not begging for subs or anything like that ).
Have a nice day! :)
 
DestroyerNecro said:
Hello
Firstly I want to say that i'm sorry if I don't have a right to post here or
If this is a wrong section(mods feel free to tell me).
So back to the topic. I am a Let's player ( I prefer horror genre ) and
I'm making videos since some time. I know I must have patience but I would
love if you can give me some tips on how to improve myself. You can watch
my latest video for example and tell me if I should do something to improve
myself. I accept any feedback ( not begging for subs or anything like that ).
Have a nice day! :)
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I believe this should go in "Reviews & Channel Feedback", but whatever.
Custom thumbnails could use a little work.
Active in FB & Twitter, not bad.
I normally give slightly more in-depth reviews, but my head's feeling groggy, so I'll just give these two.
 
DestroyerNecro said:
Hello
Firstly I want to say that i'm sorry if I don't have a right to post here or
If this is a wrong section(mods feel free to tell me).
So back to the topic. I am a Let's player ( I prefer horror genre ) and
I'm making videos since some time. I know I must have patience but I would
love if you can give me some tips on how to improve myself. You can watch
my latest video for example and tell me if I should do something to improve
myself. I accept any feedback ( not begging for subs or anything like that ).
Have a nice day! :)
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just a quick thing when you do your channel trailer lower the music sound when your saying important stuff like for example the beginning and the end when your talking about your channel

maybe mute your lets plays because having 2 sound files on at once is kinda dazing :D
 
konisbored said:
I believe this should go in "Reviews & Channel Feedback", but whatever.
Custom thumbnails could use a little work.
Active in FB & Twitter, not bad.
I normally give slightly more in-depth reviews, but my head's feeling groggy, so I'll just give these two.
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Thanks! I will take that in consideration! If any mods see this please move this
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jakassme said:
just a quick thing when you do your channel trailer lower the music sound when your saying important stuff like for example the beginning and the end when your talking about your channel

maybe mute your lets plays because having 2 sound files on at once is kinda dazing :D
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Thank you I will try that :)
 
Ok first thing: I watched your channel trailer, first tip, you're going to want to avoid using copyrighted music. It could cause issues in the future. Secondly, the audio on said music is far too loud, and YOUR audio is not loud enough. I can't understand a single word you say in the trailer, simply because I can't hear you. A gameplay video with loud music and completely muffled commentary isn't going to be very enticing to viewers is it? Thirdly, (And the rest of my comments are going to be based off of your most recent video, because I don't have the time to go through each and every one) you have no intro to your video. You want to begin your video by addressing the audience immediately, otherwise they will quickly lose interest. Fourthly, you should invest in recording software. No-one wants to see bandicam.com at the top of your vid. That's pretty much it, other than that I'd say work on your fluency in English, though I understand that's easier said than done.
 
JewBearBagel said:
Ok first thing: I watched your channel trailer, first tip, you're going to want to avoid using copyrighted music. It could cause issues in the future. Secondly, the audio on said music is far too loud, and YOUR audio is not loud enough. I can't understand a single word you say in the trailer, simply because I can't hear you. A gameplay video with loud music and completely muffled commentary isn't going to be very enticing to viewers is it? Thirdly, (And the rest of my comments are going to be based off of your most recent video, because I don't have the time to go through each and every one) you have no intro to your video. You want to begin your video by addressing the audience immediately, otherwise they will quickly lose interest. Fourthly, you should invest in recording software. No-one wants to see bandicam.com at the top of your vid. That's pretty much it, other than that I'd say work on your fluency in English, though I understand that's easier said than done.
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I will do my best! Thanks for the constructive feedback :)
Edit : from where I got the music it said royalty free
 
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