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I'll try to give you my thoughts later. I'm working on something atm.
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I'll try to give you my thoughts later. I'm working on something atm.
J.rizzo091
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its ok. just feel free to do it whenever. im just grateful that you are taking the time to do so
unknown_user0032
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Channel Design:
Banner's fine. Text could be a little more prominent, and this is just my preference but I don't like gradients (they're so 1990s). The actual banner itself, other than that, is great.
Thumbnails look good. It would be nice for a title (or a shortened version thereof), but these aren't necessary 99.9% of the time, I just personally think that they look nice in an embedded video where people can't actually see the title of the video (helps people know what they're watching and might encourage more views).
I had to watch the moment at 0:43 like three times because everyone was talking at once (and because your voice picked up louder than background voices) and I didn't realise at first the dude on the left had done something to cause the weird transition (which was VERY well edited by the way!).
But once I got it, I thought it was very clever! (rule of thumb in video, unless it's an 'ad lib shouty moment', make sure one person is generally speaking at a time, unless you are able to balance the sound so that the important dialogue stands out).
The acting in the video was very good! The production quality in terms of visuals was impressive also. I liked the found-footage-flicker that you got in there (though admittedly that bonnngggg inception style noise felt overused somewhat). And that Furby was evil as f**k hahaha.
I liked that video overall, it was entertaining!
Secondly I watched your How Magicians Make Money video. He reminds me of Dynamo hehe. That was a nifty video though I must admit I wasn't as entertained. The idea was very cool, but he was a bit inanimate. Magic is exciting and mysterious and at times dangerous, play on it!
That's all I have from what I saw. All I can say is keep sharing, keep promoting and keep trying. Post your videos as responses to popular similar/relevant videos (make sure they are relevant or you'll get no views).
All in all your channel isn't bad!
As a closing thought, you have only been uploaded regularly since April. That's only four months. Give it another six and if you're still in the same place, consider perhaps what you can change about your content. Otherwise, just give it time
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It works for me schweetie
Banner's fine. Text could be a little more prominent, and this is just my preference but I don't like gradients (they're so 1990s). The actual banner itself, other than that, is great.
Thumbnails look good. It would be nice for a title (or a shortened version thereof), but these aren't necessary 99.9% of the time, I just personally think that they look nice in an embedded video where people can't actually see the title of the video (helps people know what they're watching and might encourage more views).
I had to watch the moment at 0:43 like three times because everyone was talking at once (and because your voice picked up louder than background voices) and I didn't realise at first the dude on the left had done something to cause the weird transition (which was VERY well edited by the way!).
But once I got it, I thought it was very clever! (rule of thumb in video, unless it's an 'ad lib shouty moment', make sure one person is generally speaking at a time, unless you are able to balance the sound so that the important dialogue stands out).
The acting in the video was very good! The production quality in terms of visuals was impressive also. I liked the found-footage-flicker that you got in there (though admittedly that bonnngggg inception style noise felt overused somewhat). And that Furby was evil as f**k hahaha.
I liked that video overall, it was entertaining!
Secondly I watched your How Magicians Make Money video. He reminds me of Dynamo hehe. That was a nifty video though I must admit I wasn't as entertained. The idea was very cool, but he was a bit inanimate. Magic is exciting and mysterious and at times dangerous, play on it!
That's all I have from what I saw. All I can say is keep sharing, keep promoting and keep trying. Post your videos as responses to popular similar/relevant videos (make sure they are relevant or you'll get no views).
All in all your channel isn't bad!
As a closing thought, you have only been uploaded regularly since April. That's only four months. Give it another six and if you're still in the same place, consider perhaps what you can change about your content. Otherwise, just give it time
[DOUBLEPOST=1375999205,1375998800][/DOUBLEPOST]
It works for me schweetie
J.rizzo091
Loving YTtalk
Channel Design:
Banner's fine. Text could be a little more prominent, and this is just my preference but I don't like gradients (they're so 1990s). The actual banner itself, other than that, is great.
Thumbnails look good. It would be nice for a title (or a shortened version thereof), but these aren't necessary 99.9% of the time, I just personally think that they look nice in an embedded video where people can't actually see the title of the video (helps people know what they're watching and might encourage more views).
I had to watch the moment at 0:43 like three times because everyone was talking at once (and because your voice picked up louder than background voices) and I didn't realise at first the dude on the left had done something to cause the weird transition (which was VERY well edited by the way!).
But once I got it, I thought it was very clever! (rule of thumb in video, unless it's an 'ad lib shouty moment', make sure one person is generally speaking at a time, unless you are able to balance the sound so that the important dialogue stands out).
The acting in the video was very good! The production quality in terms of visuals was impressive also. I liked the found-footage-flicker that you got in there (though admittedly that bonnngggg inception style noise felt overused somewhat). And that Furby was evil as f**k hahaha.
I liked that video overall, it was entertaining!
Secondly I watched your How Magicians Make Money video. He reminds me of Dynamo hehe. That was a nifty video though I must admit I wasn't as entertained. The idea was very cool, but he was a bit inanimate. Magic is exciting and mysterious and at times dangerous, play on it!
That's all I have from what I saw. All I can say is keep sharing, keep promoting and keep trying. Post your videos as responses to popular similar/relevant videos (make sure they are relevant or you'll get no views).
All in all your channel isn't bad!
As a closing thought, you have only been uploaded regularly since April. That's only four months. Give it another six and if you're still in the same place, consider perhaps what you can change about your content. Otherwise, just give it time
wow that was a very good review thank you! i will definitely take everything you said into account. really good advice. believe it or not but in that particular video im the person on the left who touched the object lol. but thank you again. i'm really glad you liked. it. should i try and make my videos more share worthy? what i mean is make my videos revolve around topics that people are interested in at the moment. would that help?
unknown_user0032
I Love YTtalk
Oh you're the dude that killed everyone *slow clap*
I think honestly, short films, skits, special fx videos are GREAT for youtube. They really do well. Look at Tomska and the like. Just a bunch of dudes making films, but people LOVE it.
Oh yeah public interest is key. I personally aim my videos around what people want to hear (or perhaps something they are against) because it generates discussion -- just look at my views and subs over the space of 3 weeks to see what I mean!)
J.rizzo091
Loving YTtalk
Channel Design:
Banner's fine. Text could be a little more prominent, and this is just my preference but I don't like gradients (they're so 1990s). The actual banner itself, other than that, is great.
Thumbnails look good. It would be nice for a title (or a shortened version thereof), but these aren't necessary 99.9% of the time, I just personally think that they look nice in an embedded video where people can't actually see the title of the video (helps people know what they're watching and might encourage more views).
I had to watch the moment at 0:43 like three times because everyone was talking at once (and because your voice picked up louder than background voices) and I didn't realise at first the dude on the left had done something to cause the weird transition (which was VERY well edited by the way!).
But once I got it, I thought it was very clever! (rule of thumb in video, unless it's an 'ad lib shouty moment', make sure one person is generally speaking at a time, unless you are able to balance the sound so that the important dialogue stands out).
The acting in the video was very good! The production quality in terms of visuals was impressive also. I liked the found-footage-flicker that you got in there (though admittedly that bonnngggg inception style noise felt overused somewhat). And that Furby was evil as f**k hahaha.
I liked that video overall, it was entertaining!
Secondly I watched your How Magicians Make Money video. He reminds me of Dynamo hehe. That was a nifty video though I must admit I wasn't as entertained. The idea was very cool, but he was a bit inanimate. Magic is exciting and mysterious and at times dangerous, play on it!
That's all I have from what I saw. All I can say is keep sharing, keep promoting and keep trying. Post your videos as responses to popular similar/relevant videos (make sure they are relevant or you'll get no views).
All in all your channel isn't bad!
As a closing thought, you have only been uploaded regularly since April. That's only four months. Give it another six and if you're still in the same place, consider perhaps what you can change about your content. Otherwise, just give it time
It works for me schweetie
also your advice with the magic video. was great to. you helped solidify something that i had been planing on doing. (changing around the magic videos style) make him act more alive[DOUBLEPOST=1375999623][/DOUBLEPOST]
Oh you're the dude that killed everyone *slow clap*
I think honestly, short films, skits, special fx videos are GREAT for youtube. They really do well. Look at Tomska and the like. Just a bunch of dudes making films, but people LOVE it.
Oh yeah public interest is key. I personally aim my videos around what people want to hear (or perhaps something they are against) because it generates discussion -- just look at my views and subs over the space of 3 weeks to see what I mean!)
yeah you have made some serious progress. my plan was to continue with my skits. but make them or socially oriented to help promote views and sharing[DOUBLEPOST=1375999684][/DOUBLEPOST]also incase you where wondering. im the editor haha
unknown_user0032
I Love YTtalk
Well the editing was something I couldn't fault in that video. The twist was fantastic and the production quality (minus the sound flaws I mentioned) was great.
J.rizzo091
Loving YTtalk
thanks again so much a really means a lot i put so much work into it
unknown_user0032
I Love YTtalk
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Nice new avatar, J.rizzo091!