How long do I hold your attention?

HCAZGaming

I've Got It
I've been trying to better my commentary and making sure I speak loud and clearly with full energy throughout the entire video and would love some feedback. If you could watch it until the point where you want to click off and then list why you wanted to click off and when you clicked off then that would be great :) Feel free to be as honest as possible even if it's brutal.

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EX: Not my kind of game 4:38, not loud enough 0:20, poorly edited 1:00, etc...
 
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I like the way you use green screen to place yourself on the game
I think your commentary is nice :D
The audio quality is nice
hahha you are funny, I like the spirit :D
I think the outro is cool
I wish you all the best :D
 
25:05 - screen went black ;)

But yeah, i guess you got a bit tired looking for the owls and then you winded down a bit but I really enjoyed the video. Maybe keep the videos a bit shorter tho? :)
 
Keep videos short. Commentary is good. It felt like you were rehashing alot of the same lines. Comes with practice I guess. Maybe some overlays
Yeah I had a friend of mine say I said the same things a couple times as well, but yeah still getting better at commentating and will take the feedback and improve upon it :)

25:05 - screen went black ;)
But yeah, i guess you got a bit tired looking for the owls and then you winded down a bit but I really enjoyed the video. Maybe keep the videos a bit shorter tho? :)
Thanks man and I had it so long because I liked having each episode end at me getting a memory, I probably could have made some more edits though so it wasn't so long.
 
I think you do a pretty good job at keeping me engaged. You are funny, but not like annoying which is nice :) I have also have been meaning to play this game so cool watching this.
 
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