Ghost Recon Phantoms Video Review

[Jorzard]

Hey guys I recently posted a Ghost Recon Phantoms Live Commentary and was wondering if it would be possible to get a bit of feedback on it as it would be nice to see what I need to improve as I am thinking of becoming a Ghost Recon Phantoms exclusive channel. I will take onboard all constructive criticism but feel feel to leave some good points too!

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[zreakz]

Hey guys I recently posted a Ghost Recon Phantoms Live Commentary and was wondering if it would be possible to get a bit of feedback on it as it would be nice to see what I need to improve as I am thinking of becoming a Ghost Recon Phantoms exclusive channel. I will take onboard all constructive criticism but feel feel to leave some good points too!

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I know its a live commentary but you sound extremely boring, and a bit quiet. Something you should try is getting some friends and making a squad, while recording all their voices as well. That would probably help your video out. Other then that, the gameplay is pretty good.

 

[Jorzard]

I know its a live commentary but you sound extremely boring, and a bit quiet. Something you should try is getting some friends and making a squad, while recording all their voices as well. That would probably help your video out. Other then that, the gameplay is pretty good.

Thanks for the feedback dude I'm still kinda a newbie to all this is there any other tips you have for making my voice sound more upbeat and interesting? perhaps for when I don't have friends to play with

 

[Jorzard]

Ok so i didnt get a reply so ive tried to spice up my voice a little and increase the volume of it would you say this is a better quality video not a live comm but im trying to work on the "extremely boring voice" do you reckon this is a better quality video?

 

[BWANG!]

It's really difficult for a Let's Player to record a compelling shooter video, but at least this game is from a third person POV. I think your problem is the fact that all you say is what's going on in the game and how you are playing. And you do this with very little enthusiasm, which doesn't help. I don't think you NEED a team of friends to make this better, but it certainly couldn't hurt. My recommendation would be that you add some humor to your recordings. Maybe you pretend to be the soldier you're playing as and you do the commentary as if it's what's going on in his mind as he's fighting. Creative things like that would make your commentary less dry.