Find My Flaws + I'll Do The Same!

[MrWapk]

I feel like your channel trailer should be more specific to what games you do on your channel.

In my opinion, your channel icon should stand out more on your banner.

Your descriptions for your videos could be longer, it might help to get some more
keywords in there.

You might want to upload in 1080p.

Maybe you should make more videos of games that are in alpha or beta, something that everyone wants to see,
but can't play yet.

Other than that, everything looks perfect!

 

[ItsTehShadow]

I feel like your channel trailer should be more specific to what games you do on your channel.
I'd thought the same recently, and I'm currently making a new one with some more clips now I have a lot more videos...

In my opinion, your channel icon should stand out more on your banner.
I'll have a play around with it and see what I can change up to make it stand out more...

Your descriptions for your videos could be longer, it might help to get some more
keywords in there.
I'll try to add more info about the video in there, its all game dependent what I can think of to write

You might want to upload in 1080p.
I want to do this, but my upload is really bad and it takes hours to upload atm. I might try making a few videos in 1080p and see how long it takes...

Maybe you should make more videos of games that are in alpha or beta, something that everyone wants to see,
but can't play yet.
Good suggestion, I'll have a look around on Steam etc, was looking for a new series and that could be a good one...

Other than that, everything looks perfect!
YAY! Thanks for all this feedback its awesome

 

[MrWapk]

I feel like your channel trailer should be more specific to what games you do on your channel.
I'd thought the same recently, and I'm currently making a new one with some more clips now I have a lot more videos...

In my opinion, your channel icon should stand out more on your banner.
I'll have a play around with it and see what I can change up to make it stand out more...

Your descriptions for your videos could be longer, it might help to get some more
keywords in there.
I'll try to add more info about the video in there, its all game dependent what I can think of to write

You might want to upload in 1080p.
I want to do this, but my upload is really bad and it takes hours to upload atm. I might try making a few videos in 1080p and see how long it takes...

Maybe you should make more videos of games that are in alpha or beta, something that everyone wants to see,
but can't play yet.
Good suggestion, I'll have a look around on Steam etc, was looking for a new series and that could be a good one...

Other than that, everything looks perfect!
YAY! Thanks for all this feedback its awesome

I can't wait to see your new channel trailer!

Great! I bet it will look better!

I know what you mean, I have just found that long descriptions make videos get more views .

My upload speed is horrible too, a one minute video takes over an hour to upload in 1080p. I usually upload over night.

I bet it would help getting even more viewers!

Your welcome I'm glad I could help!

 

[UnIden7iFieD]

Hello ItsTehShadow,

While I am waiting for my video to be uploaded onto the forums for review, I decided to review you because of your deal of finding my flaws if I find yours.

Channel Design - 9.7/10 - The Channel Design is really unique. The Purple blocks mixed in with the white and black letters blend perfectly. However the Twitch logo is too blended in with the channel art making it really hard to see, (At least for my eyes).

Channel Setup - 10/10 - With playlists and organized videos set up, your channel setup gets a solid 10.

Quality of Videos - 8.5/10 720p is what I mainly saw in your top three videos. However, although 1080p is not the best, the quality of it looked pretty damn good. But it could've been better.

Likes/Dislikes Comparison - 177/197 (197= total likes/dislikes) - 8.9/10 - In this comparison I viewed your three most popular videos and compared their likes and dislikes. But understand this does not effect how I felt about your videos in the next judgement.

Videos (Did I like them or not) - 9/10 - Instead of reviewing your top 3 most popular videos I looked at #1 and #3 of your top 3 videos and I liked them both. However, the Carnivore one didn't interest me so I didn't watch it.

Overall Score - 92.2% (A-) - Although some areas were lacking in interest or quality (Very minor) your channel has impressed me quite a lot Mr. Shadow. I will subscribe to you and I hope you've enjoyed this review and use it to your full potential.

--- UnIden7iFieD

 

[ItsTehShadow]

MrWapk: MrWapk

Banner and logo are still good, as mentioned for me, I guess its a bit harder to read the links but otherwise looks good.

Your trailer is good as it gives an overview of all the games you play, only thing I would say is you need to draw people in in the first 10 seconds so maybe adding a clip from a play-through thats really interesting could keep people watching. Quality is good, I may have put some music behind to remove the silence, as its gets quiet for a few areas. I would have also added a bit with a subscribe button, and how subscribing could help them to keep up to date with videos

Thumbnails are easy to read, title and descriptions are perfect

In some of your recent videos, the volume is great. I'd just add that you could possibly sound a bit more enthusiastic, it honestly helps loads. Listen to your Shadowrun Update 1, I think they should all be like that, commentary wise

Overall though, nice to see you used the points I made before and it all looks great. Keep it up [DOUBLEPOST=1375823798,1375823122][/DOUBLEPOST]UnIden7iFieD: UnIden7iFieD

Thanks for all that, nice to hear your view

First off your banner is nice and simple, I would center the text but thats me being picky
I think for your logo however, you should replace that white border, and either make it a different color or the color of your banner...

Potentially see if you can get a custom into, its not needed but a lot of people use that one and it makes your channel stand out more...

Listening to this Beta Talks ep, your commentary is fluent which is great. The volume is fine aswell, good mix of adding audio behind. I would say there's a bit of background noise behind your mic. Maybe you could try removing that with Audacity (free) or see if you can eliminate it some other way...

Your using playlists which is great. Titles and descriptions are great. One final point would be to make a channel trailer, keep it under 1min and make it interesting with an overview of what your channel does

 

[MrWapk]

MrWapk: MrWapk

Banner and logo are still good, as mentioned for me, I guess its a bit harder to read the links but otherwise looks good.

Your trailer is good as it gives an overview of all the games you play, only thing I would say is you need to draw people in in the first 10 seconds so maybe adding a clip from a play-through thats really interesting could keep people watching. Quality is good, I may have put some music behind to remove the silence, as its gets quiet for a few areas. I would have also added a bit with a subscribe button, and how subscribing could help them to keep up to date with videos

Thumbnails are easy to read, title and descriptions are perfect

In some of your recent videos, the volume is great. I'd just add that you could possibly sound a bit more enthusiastic, it honestly helps loads. Listen to your Shadowrun Update 1, I think they should all be like that, commentary wise

Overall though, nice to see you used the points I made before and it all looks great. Keep it up

What do you mean by the links being hard to read?

I will try to make a new channel trailer, one that draws the viewers attention in the first ten seconds,
I will also add some music, and a subscribe button .

Thank you, so you think that my Shadowrun Update 1 had the best commentary out of all my videos?
I'm kind of confused, because some people say my videos like that are the best ever,
but some people say I sound robotic, or like I'm being forced to say what I say.

Thank you so much, you have had a big impact on my channel, you have helped me improve a lot !

 

[ItsTehShadow]

What do you mean by the links being hard to read?

I will try to make a new channel trailer, one that draws the viewers attention in the first ten seconds,
I will also add some music, and a subscribe button .

Thank you, so you think that my Shadowrun Update 1 had the best commentary out of all my videos?
I'm kind of confused, because some people say my videos like that are the best ever,
but some people say I sound robotic, or like I'm being forced to say what I say.

Thank you so much, you have had a big impact on my channel, you have helped me improve a lot !

Just that they kind of blend in with the background a bit, not a big problem...

Well people have different opinions, although that video had a form of script you sounded the most clear and enthusiastic on those videos. That may have been because it wasn't a live comm but if you could bring that over I think that would be great

 

[MrWapk]

Just that they kind of blend in with the background a bit, not a big problem...

Well people have different opinions, although that video had a form of script you sounded the most clear and enthusiastic on those videos. That may have been because it wasn't a live comm but if you could bring that over I think that would be great

Ohh okay, how could I fix the links?

So I should bring my post commentary personality into my live commentaries?

 

[ItsTehShadow]

Ohh okay, how could I fix the links?

So I should bring my post commentary personality into my live commentaries?

Its not as easy as it sounds, only thing would be to add a lighter section to the banner for all the links to sit infront of. I'm trying to do this with mine but its taking awhile to make it look good

I'd say so if possible, completely up to you though, just be yourself

 

[MrWapk]

Its not as easy as it sounds, only thing would be to add a lighter section to the banner for all the links to sit infront of. I'm trying to do this with mine but its taking awhile to make it look good

I'd say so if possible, completely up to you though, just be yourself

I'll try my best to get the links to stand out better

I'll also try to commentate better on my live commentaries.