Feedback on my video?

[BethPatersonYT]

Hi, my name's Beth, I was looking for feedback on my second video, a food challenge I did with my boyfriend
I was wondering what you guys thought of the editing, music choice, if you found it funny and anything else you notice.
You can see it here:

Thank you!!!
Beth x

 

[XXLRay]

Don't film in portrait orientation. You could have place the camera further away.
The content is not bad. You seem to have a lot of fun but there is not much difference to other videos of the same kind.
Think about using an end card to lead viewers to other videos of yours.

 

[BethPatersonYT]

Thanks for the advice

 

[Molitor]

Agreed about the portrait, I would recommend doing the full screen. You're having tons of fun which brings smiles to the viewers, so great job on that! Music is a good choice too.