Feedback Needed!

[Stralian]

Just uploaded my first gameplay video with commentary, and would love to have one or two people let me know what they thought of the quality, and my overall commentary capability, I for one know I have a lot to learn when it comes to being entertaining. It's the latest video on my channel and you can go on my channel via the link below.

 

[Riddikore]

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[CaptainDelugo]

I start the video, you hear a mouseclick. Ehhh??? When you start a video IMMEDIATLY start with the introduction, now it sounds kinda strange
Video and audio quality is good! A big plus for having it uploaded in 60fps!
For the first commentary it is quite good, you are talking very fluently and almost no silences in the commentary!
Now only you need to try to make it more entertaining
I know, that when you make commentaries for the first few times you sound like you just came out of your bed from a heavy night. Try to work on that, so you sound more enthousiastic, but that'll come as soon as you make more commentaries

So my feedback would be, keep this going but work on your commentaries, then all should be fine!

 

[Stralian]

I start the video, you hear a mouseclick. Ehhh??? When you start a video IMMEDIATLY start with the introduction, now it sounds kinda strange
Video and audio quality is good! A big plus for having it uploaded in 60fps!
For the first commentary it is quite good, you are talking very fluently and almost no silences in the commentary!
Now only you need to try to make it more entertaining
I know, that when you make commentaries for the first few times you sound like you just came out of your bed from a heavy night. Try to work on that, so you sound more enthousiastic, but that'll come as soon as you make more commentaries

So my feedback would be, keep this going but work on your commentaries, then all should be fine!

Cheers mate, I know why you heard a mouse click, there's a slight delay in when I click record and when it actually starts recording in Elgato so it'll take a bit but shouldn't hear another click haha.