Channel Trailer Review

Oliver Fryer

Oliver Fryer

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Hey there people, I'd like to request a review of my channel trailer, I'll be honest it did take me a few hours in Sony Vegas and a bit of embarrassment to get the end product but I'm happy with it, what do you guys think? I'm thick skinned so be extremely critical :)
 
I think the beginning would look better if you cut to the gameplay footage straight away after you press on your phone as I can see you reach forward to stop the recording. Other than that it seems alright! also i think the clip from titan fall would be more exciting if it was footage of the titan dropping in and landing right in front of you. Lastly I think finishing it after the first time you say peace out would make it more succinct :)
 
The same what Christian Harris said. After you put the remote you should have went right away to showing your clips. Honestly saying you could change the font of the text, it does not look that appealing to me, the other thing is the minecraft, it is the clip of you dying.. You could definitely be using another different clip like showing you mining diamonds and stuff.. anyways overall its good! Keep up the work!
 
CheezzyyHD said:
The same what Christian Harris said. After you put the remote you should have went right away to showing your clips. Honestly saying you could change the font of the text, it does not look that appealing to me, the other thing is the minecraft, it is the clip of you dying.. You could definitely be using another different clip like showing you mining diamonds and stuff.. anyways overall its good! Keep up the work!
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yeah cheezzyyHD is right, I shouldve mentioned the text, its a bit jarring, perhaps try something that looks a bit better with the gameplay background. Also try to choose the most exciting footage of the games you wanna feature that you have!
 
Oliver Fryer said:
Hey there people, I'd like to request a review of my channel trailer, I'll be honest it did take me a few hours in Sony Vegas and a bit of embarrassment to get the end product but I'm happy with it, what do you guys think? I'm thick skinned so be extremely critical :)
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Everything everyone else said plus some heavy metal music. You are doing hard hitting exciting FPS games you need some kind of super heavy destructive explosive metal music to go along with it. Get the audience amped up to see your stuff, make them excited!
 
JohnnyFox said:
Everything everyone else said plus some heavy metal music. You are doing hard hitting exciting FPS games you need some kind of super heavy destructive explosive metal music to go along with it. Get the audience amped up to see your stuff, make them excited!
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or some filthy filthy dubstep
 
Christian Harris said:
or some filthy filthy dubstep
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Gotta be fast though. Something fast and explosive sounding. Anything calm and relaxing won't get over. I just use my trailer spot for whatever episode i'm trying to promote because I don't know if trailers even do much good.

There should be an option to have the view be the same for subbed and not subbed because the unsubscribed are kinda screwed in a fact that they can't see the full content. They gotta hit the button just to see everything and for some reason the sub button doesnt even work for me because I hit it, and then 2 hours later I'm not subbed to that person anymore.
 
I use my trailer more to attract new subs and let them know what my channel is about... but I really need to update mine, my channel trailer is really old and way worse than I can do now
 
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