Cat Mario Anger | Needing Some Feedback

KillaDays

KillaDays

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WARNING: There are a lot of swears in this video. It's an angry video. I'm angry. lol.


So I'm looking for some feedback on my editing here. I used a free program, and there is definitely a whole lot of room to improve, but I'm just looking for anything more specific that I can fix with my editing. This was originally an hour long, so I managed to get it down to 18 minutes.

Some things I think I need to work on:
-spazzy jumpcuts
-serial abuse of only two transitions

Other than that I'm not entirely sure. Any help would be appreciated! :)
 
I love the video, for sure. The only thing I'd say to do to this video is just make your audio just a little louder. Other than that, I like your style.
 
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I would whittle it down a bit more, perhaps. The video was good, but for the style nearly 20 minutes is a bit on the long side. Find your favorite moments from when you were playing, and highlight the best of the best. And keep at it. I hope that helps. :)
 
Thanks it definitely does. It seems so far the main issue with this video from the other places I have been posting it is the length. My next video in this style I'm aiming to make it 5-10mins max. Thanks for the advice :)
 
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