Can I get a review?? :)

PaulKehoe

PaulKehoe

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Hey Guys! :) I know I asked for a review not too long ago but I was thinking maybe some other people that didnt see it before could review it also if they want to :)
Thanks!
 
Hmm... I was watching the featured video on your channel and I must say that the cursing is a bit off putting even though it was bleeped. Also, the background is a bit cluttered; maybe consider moving somewhere more clear? Beyond that, it's a pretty good video. You have good quality audio and video. However, the transitions to the photos are a bit clunky, maybe choose something simpler. Also, the channel art is nice, but the blue is a bit in your face. It's a good start. Good luck :)
 
Thanks for the review!! :) I apologise for the cursing I can see now how it can turn people off from the video it was just me being normal but now I think I'm gonna cancel out cursing as much as possible. Yeah a lot of the things you mentioned are things I've been thinking for a while now so it good to see someone think that too cus now I know for sure it needs to change. Thanks again :)
 
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