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What I Liked
  1. I like how you picked an interesting subject: Nobody would ever keep rats as a pet and tell people why they like them as pets.
  2. I thought it was really cool how you chose clips of you other than talking in the camera in the first part of the video. For example, you showed the rats in the cage when you referenced the rat's cage, showed yourself playing with them and feeding them etc.
  3. You have a warm personality and are easy to listen too the first minute and a half. Too long of a video. No matter how great of a personality you have, it's difficult to listen to someone talking in the camera most the time.
What I Didn't Like
  1. Again, I thought it was too long. I don't think I'm your target audience, which added to the issue.
  2. I thought your message was all over the place: You say meet my rats, which you introduced us too, but then you went on too myths of rats and stuff. It's irrelevant to your topic.
Hope this helps :)

laurenelloise said:
Hey everyone.

I'd love to get some feedback on my most recent video (
)

It's a Meet My Rats video hehe.

Side note: Not sure if we are allowed to ask for feedback on a specific video or not?

Thank you!
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chill_bro_videos said:
What I Liked
  1. I like how you picked an interesting subject: Nobody would ever keep rats as a pet and tell people why they like them as pets.
  2. I thought it was really cool how you chose clips of you other than talking in the camera in the first part of the video. For example, you showed the rats in the cage when you referenced the rat's cage, showed yourself playing with them and feeding them etc.
  3. You have a warm personality and are easy to listen too the first minute and a half. Too long of a video. No matter how great of a personality you have, it's difficult to listen to someone talking in the camera most the time.
What I Didn't Like
  1. Again, I thought it was too long. I don't think I'm your target audience, which added to the issue.
  2. I thought your message was all over the place: You say meet my rats, which you introduced us too, but then you went on too myths of rats and stuff. It's irrelevant to your topic.
Hope this helps :)
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Well this guy was on point. Too long, (Also I might not be part of your target audience), go off topic. If you want to make 10 min long videos rather cover a couple of topics then just one. That or shorten your video to 4 min a topic.
If you shorten your videos you would have time for more videos, meaning you would be able to upload more content meaning more views and it would show your active more.
I see you upload once a week. If you go the shorten video route maybe upload twice a week even if it means creating the video over the weekend and the holding it back till the specific day you want to upload.
 
laurenelloise said:
Hey everyone.

I'd love to get some feedback on my most recent video (
)

It's a Meet My Rats video hehe.

Side note: Not sure if we are allowed to ask for feedback on a specific video or not?

Thank you!
Click to expand...

Just wanted to say, those rats are cute! I had rats of my own, they are legitly like little small doggies, just as smart as doggies haha. Yeah I had males because they are very relaxed, sad they only last for 2-3 years :( - Great video! Very interesting and nice background music. My rats always bit me thru the cage though even though I never fed them through there. They weren't neutered either so slightly aggressive when it came to territory I guess. Anyways, good video and cute rats!

Edit: I think a bit of research would be better for your video, as rats DO bite, just as dogs bite, just as any animal ever, domesticated or not. Biting to kill/hurt you is not the same as having the ability to bite because I've gotten bite before through the skin and if you search up "Rat bites" you will see forums of people who have owned rats for 5-10 years and had once or twice gotten bit through the skin pretty badly.
 
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