littleseal17
I've Got It
Hey so I wrote out a sketch for my 100 subscriber milestone but im not sure if i like it... if you could read and and give me feedback that would be awesome! thanks 
L means Laquisha (the ghetto character)
R means Rose (The girly girl character)
Celebration
Me – Hey guys, thanks for coming and thanks for helping me reach 100 subscribers!
L – Why you thankin us? We didn’t do anything, thank your subs.
R – Im so happy I could help! I know that the one video I did really gave you a lot of views and subscribers!
Me - …Yea I agree with Laquisha *bring camera out*
Hey guys! I wanted to tell you guys how awesome you are *say while walking away*
R – This is just so nice! I mean she is finally getting the recognition she deserves!
L – Yea…
Me – Yea Laquisha has been really good today, no mean comments or tricks! I really think she’s turned a corner! *smile*
L - Whatever, when do we get to eat?
R – Laquisha you’re so concerned about food all the time, jeez. Good thing the cookie cake isn’t made from tacos…
L- That would hurt more….
R – what?
L – nothing… oh look she’s coming back
Me - *walking back in* I better go entertain my guests, thanks again! Bye!
Me – sorry I just had to thank them
L – Yea can we eat now?
Me – Sure….
R – Let’s sing a song…. Oh! Instead of happy birthday let’s say youtube milestone! *sings* It fits!
L – Alright, come over here! Let’s celebrate together! *all walk by me*
R – 1,2,3 *her and L sing, L looks bored*
Me - *leans down to blow candle out* L - *smiles and shoves hand down*
My face gets smushed then I lift up my head. Screenshot and text saying “Thanks for the 100 subs”
L means Laquisha (the ghetto character)
R means Rose (The girly girl character)
Celebration
Me – Hey guys, thanks for coming and thanks for helping me reach 100 subscribers!
L – Why you thankin us? We didn’t do anything, thank your subs.
R – Im so happy I could help! I know that the one video I did really gave you a lot of views and subscribers!
Me - …Yea I agree with Laquisha *bring camera out*
Hey guys! I wanted to tell you guys how awesome you are *say while walking away*
R – This is just so nice! I mean she is finally getting the recognition she deserves!
L – Yea…
Me – Yea Laquisha has been really good today, no mean comments or tricks! I really think she’s turned a corner! *smile*
L - Whatever, when do we get to eat?
R – Laquisha you’re so concerned about food all the time, jeez. Good thing the cookie cake isn’t made from tacos…
L- That would hurt more….
R – what?
L – nothing… oh look she’s coming back
Me - *walking back in* I better go entertain my guests, thanks again! Bye!
Me – sorry I just had to thank them
L – Yea can we eat now?
Me – Sure….
R – Let’s sing a song…. Oh! Instead of happy birthday let’s say youtube milestone! *sings* It fits!
L – Alright, come over here! Let’s celebrate together! *all walk by me*
R – 1,2,3 *her and L sing, L looks bored*
Me - *leans down to blow candle out* L - *smiles and shoves hand down*
My face gets smushed then I lift up my head. Screenshot and text saying “Thanks for the 100 subs”
Not directly related to your question, but my first impression thought that L is left hand and R is right hand?