When do I know I am over editing my video

Hello

I'm a new youtube videos creator, my videos are about my gameplay in various video games like league of legends, valorant, hearthstone and supervive

Yesterday i posted my first "real" video, it was a 30min footage of my gameplay in Arena LOL, which I edited down to 9 minutes, and I added many effects, sounds, overlaying text and images

When I first started editing, I was expecting it to take around 2 to 3 days, but it turned out to be a 8 days work (2 to 5 hours per day), and the editing file grew bigger and bigger

Now i am happy with the result for it being my first real edited video, but I want your guys' opinion if I over did it?

And I want your advice on generally how to know not to over do it?

This is my video for reference
 
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