PikachuNarutodude
I've Got It
First of all before u get the wrong idea. I want to make the experience better for the viewer so it means something to them, not for subs and stuff. I would like some hardcore critism on what I can do better

Thank you that means/helps a lotYou sound pretty boring and generic. I don't like any gaming channel (just my own preference), but the ones that are popular are "exciting", at least to other people. Commentating isn't like mumbling to your Mother, it's about entertainment. Be enthusiastic.
Honestly, you need better graphics. The videos you post are mainly in 480p. In today's YouTube gaming world you need at least 720p. And try to extend your voice. Don't have it one pitch the entire time(i.e. if something bad happens scream a little, something funny laugh, something good/exciting cheer) Also, go for smaller video times. YouTube"s audience have a low attention span, most won't watch an entire 10, 15, minute gameplay unless it's really exciting. I really hopes this help. Good luck bro.
Thank you for the input. Ill try to do that with the video i make in about an hour. Tell me if it looks better when it goes up plsI agree with the low attention span which means you have to make shorter videos, I know it's hard as I am also trying to shorten my videos. But try to edit the boring parts out and maybe even make a montage of all the funny, epic, scary, etc. parts so its more entertaining and eye catching to the viewer.