The Blockheads iOS Let's Play Quality?

Epic12

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Can anyone check out this video and tell me what you think is good, bad and what could be improved?
Thanks guys!
 
I am brutally honest with reviews so don't take it personally:

First off the intro is horrid... It's super typical and beginner-like. I suggest not using one at all or getting a better one.

The intro volume is significantly louder than the main game volume; you should level it more for future videos.

Black bars on the side are distracting, you should rid the video of them by adjusting the size of the video.

The commentary volume is too low; I literally had to turn my volume up to 70% (it's usually at 25%). Tinker around with your audio to find a good balance.

Your audio quality is not good. Not horrible, it's okay.

You smack lips a lot, like more than me, haha. I do a lot too too so don't think too much about it. I just try to be conscious of it during recording or edit it out.

I didn't like how you took over 4 minutes to get to the closing of the video. You kept saying, "Thank you for watching," then switched back to playing the game.

The outro overlay: it might be better to just overlay an active video rather than placing "Last Video" on a still. It look super plain.

Game is interesting. I'm not sure if I'd get it but it's pretty cool for an iOS game.

Very thorough explanation.

Video quality (720p) is good.
 
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