The Best Video I Have Ever Made?

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czikor

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Hi!
So I just uploaded the best video I have done yet!
Check it out here please:
I'm open to any feedback or suggestion.
 
It's alight, just the use of language needs a bit of help. It all depends on your audience, if you're aiming for kids over fifteen use many camera angles to keep them watching. One takes are not the thing anymore,
 
Intro was too long, transitions seem a bit long as well. You have a mix of funny ways and actual useful ways to use it. Pick one or the other and speed through it (i suggest not funny, because the funny parts were pretty dry). Lastly, change your filming location! It's dark and dreary.
You have a great concept, just needs a bit better execution
 
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