My latest video... :/

[Christiney92]

I would really like someone to review the lasted video video I made on my channel. It's called "Favourites :3" - please let me know what you think on these areas:

1. Does it retain your attention
2. Is the editing too much or too little
3. What can I improve on
4. What I'm doing right/wrong
5. Do you find it entertaining
6. What can I do to make it more engaging

Thank you! This would really help me.

 

[morelikecappuccino]

That was actually hilarious! your Law of attraction xD
ahhhhh..... ahhh...

Even your favorite things was entertaing BUT WAAY too long -.- and you mentioned you watched dragon ball gt

Good:
Editing is excellent! And keeps a solid engagement without copying too many other youtubers *digital zoom in* style of saying crap with the screen blown up. yours somehow seems new or different. Videos are wilde and take enough turns to keep me locked in + with a decent time limit I dont feel I wasted anything.

Bad:
Seems as though your channel is going through a identity crisis, with lets plays and short play through s and about me videos. Who is watching? I think quick plays such as a round or too seems to work well for you. with a timelimit of about 1-3 minutes

Ugly:
Somehow you do seem under subscribed for your content. However its easy to see why. Videos are all over the place and are not really themed to anything. Remember only the super stars or whatever can do stuff like that and survive haha
Also you mentioned you watch dragon ballz gt
And never mentioned watching Black lagoon or code geass...