My first planned/filmed video

[MrMaceCon]

So I am just looking for some feedback and thoughts on the following:
1) Does my video have a topic/content that is something that is appealing?
2) I only have a beginners ability/just learning how to film and angles to use, mic volume and such, any feedback on what I did here and what I might want to do in the future would be great.
3)I need to do something with outros of my videos (not sure what happened to my outro on this one, uploading YT cut my video in a few spots) Any suggestions on outros? As of right now I have a MrMason title/animation that will close out my videos before a end credit.

Thank You in advance

 

[coliwob]

You should put the like and subscribe stuff at the end of the video.

Your intro needs some work, like a lot of work, it was abrupt and not memorable, all I can remember about it now is that it was blue.

I'd have done less than 10 seconds introduction then done the intro (which needs some sound. ( I know how hard that is because I don't have any over mine either) ask around if you are struggling because you might get someone willing to make you an intro and that would be great.

As for the video I liked the concept but it wasn't executed in the best way. The difference between the perspective was almost literally night and day, I thought the difference in backgrounds detracted from the over all quality of the skit.

I'd have kept the bckgrounds similar, because the characters are in same location after all, maybe use a hat or obvious change in clothing to identify each character. You could also have played shop music over the top and that would have really set the scene, never under estimate the power of sound.

You could have done more than 2 questions as well, 2 wasn't enough because I found it quite interesting and you present yourself well. So in the end I wanted more.