My channel - Making it happen - Needs your help

[Making it happen]

I have been vlogging for around 8 months now. And I would like to get some feedback/input from youtubers that have been in the game for longer and starters like myself.

This is my channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCuS5fmeEDpnW5JPMdRhGm7A

And here is my latest vlog:

I can take hard criticism and don't need sugar coating - honest feedback will help my channel grow

Thank you