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The lighting and sound are rough. We know that much.
We're looking for feedback on pacing and engagement. It's a lengthier video, with sketch and information context intermixed.
 
I like it! the only thing I don't is the intro another thing is that 20 mins is way too long. Most viewers don't last more than 3
 
Yeup and if you manage to keep them watching through the first 15 secs, they are yours for the rest of the 3 mins. ADD bunch they are :hot:
 
I gotta admit, I only watched 2 minutes of that video. BUT you guys had me smiling and laughing throughout, so that's a plus.

That being said, if pacing is something you're looking for, I would suggest going a bit faster. 2 minutes in and you're just explaining the plot of something that seems very comedic doesn't work. Now if this were an actual, horrific seance then that'd be alright. I personally would shorten down on the intro a bit, reduce each clip by a certain amount of seconds (and equal amount!) and speed up the conversation a bit more. Just a bit, too much and it'll seem like you're rushing through it.

THAT said, I think Imma check out your channel.
 
SorenExplosions said:
I gotta admit, I only watched 2 minutes of that video. BUT you guys had me smiling and laughing throughout, so that's a plus.

That being said, if pacing is something you're looking for, I would suggest going a bit faster. 2 minutes in and you're just explaining the plot of something that seems very comedic doesn't work. Now if this were an actual, horrific seance then that'd be alright. I personally would shorten down on the intro a bit, reduce each clip by a certain amount of seconds (and equal amount!) and speed up the conversation a bit more. Just a bit, too much and it'll seem like you're rushing through it.

THAT said, I think Imma check out your channel.
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Thanks for the feedback. I think these are criticisms that I probably had tucked away in my head while looking over the video and simply failed to acknowledge. I definitely should work on being more self critical.
Lessons for next time!
 
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