Just started Youtube :D - Feedback please?

[JohnKag]

Hi,
I just uploaded my first video on my new channel Kaglife.
Would you please take a look at it and give me some feedback since, as I can guess, you have more experience that I do?
Thanks a lot, have fun

Link to my channel: /channel/UCbpfagpuKyqWKEsdoqGX8FA

 

[Kath]

Moved this to the Review section, as all reviews go there. Please introduce yourself telling us about yourself and not your channel, thanks

 

[JohnKag]

Thank you, and my apologies