I'm very new, what d you guys think is good and bad?

[whOrganism]

Hey there, my name is whOrganism. I usually play League of Legends, but i also enjoy playing anything that is multiplayer. I just recently started to get into editing videos, and was curious to see what people thought, this was one of the recommended sites for information/advice.

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Here is my latest work i'd really appreciate any feedback. Thanks for your time, i hope to be a part of this community one day.

 

[JustTyler]

First of all that intro is bad.
The montage is pretty good and the music is a good choice.

 

[TastyGamers]

I think that was good, however the music was a bit too loud for me personally.

 

[whOrganism]

First of all that intro is bad.
The montage is pretty good and the music is a good choice.

Thank you for checking it out, i wrote down what you said and will work on it for next time!

I think that was good, however the music was a bit too loud for me personally.

Thank you Tasty, do you think the volume overall was too loud, or just the music side of it?

 

[TastyGamers]

Thank you for checking it out, i wrote down what you said and will work on it for next time!


Thank you Tasty, do you think the volume overall was too loud, or just the music side of it?

For me only music was too load.