first video - animation comedy

[amHOWL]

This is my first attempt, kind of an experiment, at producing this kind of youtube video. The concept is kind of a spoof vlog. I would appreciate any type of thoughts you might have. More specifically do you think the comedy works? And, is this type of limited animation watchable or is it too choppy/unusual?

I know that the audio needs some work, and probably my voice acting as well.

Thanks, any feedback is appreciated.

 

[Jacadamia]

I know I already said this on your video, but I loved this : -] Satire is one of my favorite things and this hit the nail on the head. It was really quirky and charming and looks nice too!

Hmmm... the only thing I think you could work on is maybe adding something that makes it a bit more obvious this is a spoof. I mean, it's pretty obvious, but maybe something in your title, thumbnail, and maybe even video to hint at it, since most people I think would be clicking your video to see the impression, not a comedic satire (unless that's what your going for, which is hilarious, but maybe not the best for self-marketing)