Feedback on my first How-to?

[BearScar]

Hey there! I'm a noobish youtuber who need some feedback on my first minecraft How-To video.

If you are not familiar with the game, I understand, but is the length, content and voice over okay?

 

[Dutchie Abroad]

Watched till about half way, think your voice over and pace is fine. Maybe consider adding a non intrusive background music, as it is a bit quiet here and there. This tutorial would be easy to follow for people who are familiar with the materials, however if you intent this tutorial to be more for beginners, consider telling you audience which materials you are putting down and maybe even where to get them or how to craft them