Feedback on 1st Video-to-Video collab

[Harpuia]

So I was looking for feedback on this video, mainly if it looks like I did alright with the edits and if it was entertaining enough, and what things I could improve in a future collab. Thanks.

 

[Jed]

It was a pretty good attempt for your first try. Mostly the conversation flowed well are there were only 1 or 2 places where there was maybe a bit of awkward silence but the editing was good. I don't really know much about Pokemon but you two showed a lot of passion for it. If I was to give a bit of critique it would be that at times you look petrified of the camera and your acting sometimes leaves a bit to be desired but this can be perfected over time and it was seriously a good attempt

 

[seejacklive]

I found it entertaining, although I don't particularly like Pokemon, It was good