Can i get feedback on this video and my channel to improve

[TheRobz]

Hi guy i just got back to commenting on videos, should i keep doing or should i improve my videos i can take any constructive criticism its for the good

here is the link of my latest video

MY CHANNEL IS

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCNS5EFKw-EZ99GgQn2hrSLQ

 

[iMSaiyan]

Your title is close to click bait... audio can be louder, thumbnails were okay, too little content on your channel to really tell.