Any feedback on my most recent video

[Gods of Odds]

I've been trying to improve my videos in pretty much every way, art, audio and so on, I would appreciate anyone letting me know what they think:

 

[mirrorlessNY(youtuber)]

I would make shorter videos, also would use less of sliding effect - can change character movement while whole scene remains static

 

[BrainDancer]

your narration is pretty good and consistent. I like the way you drew the armor.

 

[Gods of Odds]

your narration is pretty good and consistent. I like the way you drew the armor.

Thanks, if you mean to Musashi red armour, I'll be honest it took me quite a while to do. I am quite happy with how it turned out, I'm slowly improving with my armour drawing.