in all honesty the video is ok, the lighting is great you look great. but the editing isnt the best, the music is to loud for the video. but you do have lots to talk about but i feel like you need to relax more and slow down your trying to hard to be something your not, like my first thought was are you trying to be tyler oakley. slow down it will give the video a more natural feel.
keep up the good work though.